| RedShoe |
05-03-2006 08:28 PM |
Kissasses.
fl_prn_str, don't listen to these liars. That trailer fucking sucked ass.
There's no music. Music can create mood. There's no sexiness. I think I saw more limp dick than anything else. That cum looked like lotion, even if it was real. The joke gets cut off at the end. I'm all for funny, but show only a quick blurb at the end, don't ruin the whole story like this trailer did. The text above the logo hard to read. Either ditch the tv filter (which doesn't make sense) or ditch those words, or increase the logo size. Fill up the frame with that logo. Put it right in their face. Also, I'd avoid light stands and camera clicking sounds on what looks like a reality site. Try to show more than just a few awkward, shakey closeups. You can't do much about the story line now, but saying his wife died will remind surfers of their wives and family and distract them from what they need to be doing which is getting hot and horny enough to buy a membership. Psychology plays an important part of the trailer. For as funny as the story line might be there are still just certain things that a majority of your surfers just might not find as funny as you do. Me, personally, I think death is hilarious, but I'd never joke about it or mention to a group of people I was trying to sell a fantasy to.
Add some music, add some flow.
Also, it's about 21 seconds too long. And watermark that shit. Never let them forget where they are. You want your domain BRANDED into their minds.
If you need to, hire a pro. Video editors can be a very valuable asset to creating more cash flow for you. You should always hire people that will produce more than you pay them. A good video editor can do just that.
And no this is not a solicitation for work, I quit editing for other people a long time ago. I'm just offering you some advice. Take it or leave it.
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