Need comments
 

Well, started a free gallerie couple a days ago. Would appreciate your opinion - lucky.pornstar.com

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still need comments on lucky.pornstar.com
 

Is it that bad? Guys, drop a line about my first site building experience - it's really important to me.

Thanx!! :thumbsup

Yeah, it's BAD now - something gone not the way it suppose to. Index.html is a mess now... Sorry, for disturbing...

Woa! That background's really hard on the eyes!

The pattern and color of the background really give
the site a 'frantic' look for me. You might consider
going with a solid color or something?

Regarding the problem with the code, I hope you get
that fixed. It looks like your table structure's off.
Or else it could be the iframe thing -- I don't know, I
didn't look closely at the code.

One way to fix it is to remove the components that aren't
appearing they way they should and start putting them
back in one at a time, making sure each one looks okay
before you reinstall the next one.

Other than the background and the problem with the
coding, everything looks pretty cool! What script are
you using? (If you don't mind my asking.)

Thanx, Uranium!! =]
 

Thanx for comments!! I've updated the index.html and it's alright now. It seems it was a problem with iframes.

I will change the background soon and will change it for the solid color. I also think of trying to design the new page in photoshop and then slicing it in dreamweaver. Just have to pick up a courage :winkwink:

I've changed the bg now and added more pics/links.

Looking forward for your critics.

Well, I like the background a lot better, but that layout of thumbs is
a little strange. It's good to see something new -- I mean, that doesn't
have that generic, cookie-cutter layout -- and I like that hopscotch
layout toward the bottom, but that long strip of thumbs from the top
until you get to the hopscotch layout I would replace with a solid table.

You may want to consider a solid pink or white or light-pink (if not
crimson red) background rather than blue also. I think the color of the
background now clashes with your logo up top.

Hope this helps!

Well, I sort of updated the site. I also think of replacing those pink buttons with solid text links. Will update after the holidays :winkwink:

Thanx for help, Uranium!! :thumbsup

nice site 8 )

not bad , but could be way better

well, it could be if I had a previous experience, I guess. but what could be better?

cooooool

Thanx, Chris!! Glad you like it :playboy

still need your opinions
 

I've updated lucky.pornstar.com a little, but I wonder whether there're too many thumbs? :disgust

I'm a nub to adult stuff but I think a lil more spacing between the thumbs and some perverted descriptions might help?

good idea, I'll consider it.
THANX!! :thumbsup

hah exactly what i was gonna say

ok, I'll change the site someday (it'll take a little time to add text to all the thumbs:( ). thanx for ideas!!

I thinks you need much more revise on your site, put some txt and description it might work it, put some flashing.

I have added some description text to recent posts, modified a meta tag, put iframe in the beginning of the page.

The reason I did so little changes is that I registered my first blog. It can be found via sexbabe(dot)thumblogger(dot)com. Hope to hear your comments on it aswell.

Text under the images is a good idea because first it help's you with your ranking in google, second it's easier to look at your thumbnails if you compare to your bottom ones.

Freeze-Be, excuse my lame question, but how do I know what's my ranking in google?

It looks busy.... you know what I mean? Maybe it's the colors. But over all it's about average.

http://pr.blogflux.com/
or you can get the google toolbar:winkwink:

it's seems to me there are too many thumbs...
also they can be smaller... so the page will download faster...
i like the text under thumbs too, but the alt text will be useful (for se)

djum, actually there's the alt text for every image.

I also think of minimizing thumb quantity, but I've seen some comments people liking bigger thumbs.

Thanx anyway!!

sorry... i found the alt text now =)
but i don't understand why for such a big quantity of thumbs on the one page... may be smb explains me, please? imho if we give many pics to surfer for free he won't pay for the access 'cause he'll be already enough

true, djum.... I'll minimize the quantity of thumbs soon...
Thanx!

Pictures are good but design ...