my first design of a paysite
 

i was bored and i've try to design something. this was made in 1 hour. so what do you think?

http://img445.imageshack.us/img445/5...tdesign5ku.jpg

any critics?

Not bad. It does look rushed. Needs more text. More variety. There's some flaws here and there as Im sure you can see. I give it a 4 1/2. A lot of room for improvement.

this paysite will close down pretty quick
stick to whatever youre doing apart from designing paysites

this paysite will close down pretty quick
stick to whatever youre doing apart from designing paysites

like i said it was made in 1 hour.in 2-3 days i can make something much better. anyway i will post later if anyone is interested to get one paysite free.

not the worst I have seen. :thumbsup

I've seen worst work done by self-titled professionals. That being said, don't quit your day job. :)

I've seen worst work done by self-titled "professionals". That being said, don't quit your day job. :)

More like a simple AVS/AEN design.

Like DamageX said, don't quit your day job just yet.

tnx guys

A good start ... I'd be interested in what it would look like if you spent more time. Keep working and one day you'll be able to charge for your work.

anyway i will start a small project for 4 persons. i will make 4 paysites for free for 4 guys from gfy and i will post the designs here to say what do you think. i have to find 4 guys first that want some free design.

nice start man, but there r lots of things to be done about it ;)

hit me up if you are serious...I think your design is pretty amateur looking, but I need a second tour for my site that is amateur style

hit me up if you are serious about the free thing, I would love to give you some practice [email protected]

i've just click on a site from your portofoliu. that guy has spywares, viruses nad other shitty stuff

can i get a icq number?

102893553

Good start! but i completely hate the fonts... go with more "delicate" ones.