Look only if you can help!!! PART 2 hehe
 

Well is this any better? Do you see any fuckups? etc..... How does it load, Thank you:winkwink:

I really hate stating the obvious.... (nah.... I cannot lie... I love it.), but how about a link?

whats the url again?

http://analscream.com/vatest/


The design is too empty. Stop trying to impress your surfer with cool borders and backgrounds. They don't give a shit how cool your logo looks if the porn isn't high quality.

Thats the same one as before... if so much better

I'd say you need to get some sun on the gut of your dude.

:winkwink:

start over again

what a retard iam Told ya im retarded http://www.analscream.com/vatest/

I hope you don't expect to crank something out in 30 min that will convert well. It takes time to make a good design and believe it or not there is a lot of key factors that go into a design. Us designers don't just throw some pictures together and hope it works. There is a formula to a site that will convert. If you look hard enough you might see it, or if you're lucky like me you can find somebody willing to teach you.


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That being said I'm not the BEST designer on the net, and I don't claim to be. Just offering my :2 cents:

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