Just to let everyone know....
 

Hey guys Thank you so much for your help everyone of you.
I took what ya all said and re-did this and re-did that and I like it now myself. But if ya see anything else wrong with it let me know pwease hehe..
http://www.givenhead.com/

This is it thank you

Pro Im off foxhill road was a medic firefighter for 10 years in phoebus :)

Nice logo..

Looks good..

The typo is still in there ...

ARGH :mad: damnit hehe thanks core It is fixed now experience lol

That chix on the join page looks really scary and dangerous, it would be good to put something else there, just a thought.

...the tour pages look kinda boring and dry ... :ugone2far

http://www.givenhead.com/xfg0059.jpg
I would find a real hottie and not use the current pic. Its hard to sell 'ugly'.

That girl looks like a crazy retard who wants to bite his dick off.

just what we need, another cheapo who won't give the porn away for free.

OMG that chick is ugly. Dont use free content for a tour page.

:2 cents:

I'm just glad people are keeping me up to date on the progress of their sites...but please in the future could you make sure to either fax me this info...I prefer messenger...but will settle for a fax.