check the text for me please.
 

About to launch our "Win a trip to Prague" competition. Before we do can you check out the page and text and give me your opinions.

http://www.paulmarkham.com/prague/

Seems ok to me, sounds like a good competition.

i like it

Looks cool to me..explains it all quickly

Here are some of my suggestions:

We will pay for your flight and hotel while you stay in beautiful Prague and Brno where you'll meet Paul, Eva, and the rest of the fabulous crew. Watch as we shoot premium content and you may even be invited to participate in one of our shoots. Sightsee and party as you have a great time experiencing Czech beer, food, and gorgeous women. The possibilities are unlimited and the sky is the only limit for the winners.

Let me know if you like that and I'll work on the other text.

I'm charging by the hour, by the way. :winkwink:

Thanks for that.

How much do you charge?

We will meet you at the airport and wisk you off to see the delights of Prague. You will help us cast glamorous Czech models as you take in the historic and picturesque backdrop of one of Eastern Europe's most beautiful cities. Then we're off to Brno for a few magical days to see the studio and meet with the rest of our team. This is where you see where the magic is made while you watch us shoot and see what goes on behind the camera.

That is pretty much ok, not much to add to that. I would just clean up the English a bit (I assume most of your affiliates / customers are English speaking). Some of it is broken. :2 cents:

On the house. :thumbsup

Great contest and good luck to the winner.

Thanks Rob.

Will be launching the competition next week.

You're very welcome, Paul. :thumbsup