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This is the final copy I have come to for our press release.

Could anyone donate a few minutes of their time to find any errors or make any recommendations?
The release is geared towards attracting consumer attention to the site.
I will be submiting to several of the wires, suggestions are also welcome.

Thank you so much for your time.

ok see it below now.

Media Release


March 24th, 2005
FOR IMMEDIATE RELEASE

freePlaystations.com offers members new Playstation Portable (PSP)

The new website freePlaystations.com has added the recently released Sony Playstation Portable to its line of products. Owners of freePlaystations.com expect membership levels to rise dramatically in the coming weeks, as Playstation Portable is introduced for the first time to the North American market.




(Vancouver, British Columbia) - This week, W7 Media has added the highly anticipated gaming system from Sony, Playstation Portable, to freePlaystations.com, their latest website. The PSP system is due for release March 24th and so far the response has been very positive. Through partnerships with advertisers, freePlaystations.com is able to provide high-end Playstation products at no direct cost to the consumer.





W7 Media founder Steen Hof believes that adding the new Playstation Portable system is a win-win for their partners and consumers. He explains; "By completing our easy process consumers can obtain a product that will be retailing for over $400 at no out of pocket cost." The website works on incentive based viral marketing, providing sponsors with valuable consumer leads and data while consumers can get a free Playstation product in exchange for their participation.





Prior to the addition of the Playstation Portable, freePlaystations.com's most popular item was the Playstation 2, closely followed by game bundles and gift certificates that are also offered. "Soon after adding the PSP, we knew that the demand was going to be huge" says Hof. "Our member base is rapidly increasing". The company has units on pre-order, reserved for their members who have already completed the offer. freePlaystations.com anticipates its member base will grow exponentially with the release of the new Sony PSP.






W7 Media is putting its site in a league of its own by servicing the international community. "Thanks to the great relationships we maintain with our partners, we are also able to provide this service on a long term basis." says the founder. The company is planning on expanding this service by creating other websites of similar nature.





About W7 Media


W7 Media is a digital investment firm, specializing in intellectual property, consumer leads, data and media purchasing. Further information can be obtained from its corporate website at www.W7.com.
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Media Contact: W7 Media Inc.
Phone: +1 (800) 922-****
+1 (604) 537-****
Email: ***@*7.com
Website: http://www.W7.com

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