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Originally Posted by AsianDivaGirlsWebDude
So share an example of your porn (sometimes erotica) writing.
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Gee, I thought you'd never ask...
How about a slice from Sam Shale - Private Dick in The Case of the Rebellious Redhead
She landed with her legs spread and her robe sliding off her shoulders. I got my first look at the red forest and I hoped my luck was running bad. If she answered me to quickly, I'd have to end the show.
"Go ahead, Sammy. Beat me if you like but you won't get another word out of me."
"Beat you? I only beat the drums, dumpling. I've got better plans for you." I watched her chest heave and man what a chest. Her skin was as smooth as the paint job on a 47 Chevy. Smooth and creamy and I wanted a taste. I dropped to my knees and sent my lips walking through that curly red forest. That's when I knew she wanted it. She had that smell, like a two-dollar hooker with a ten-dollar john. She tried to stop the moan, but it pried its way out from between her bee-stung lips while I sent my tongue spelunking in her cave of love. I found gold and her hips bucked up to meet me. I slid my hand beneath her bottom and felt for that tight space that I wanted so bad. When my finger found the ring she gasped again and this time it was followed by words I never heard from a woman.
"Time for the main event, sweet cakes." I turned her face down on the couch, her cheek to the cushions and her ass high in the air. It was an uncomfortable position with her wrists tied behind her, but it put me in the driver's seat. "One more time, red. Who wanted to kill Joel Cairo?"
"I don't know, Sam," she cried. "I swear. I don't know."
"Then you're in for a rough night, I'd say." I sent my finger on a mission straight through Saturn's puckered ring and right into the black hole. Lola shrieked and bucked, but not to get away. She wanted more. She wanted it deeper and I had her where I wanted her. With one last twist I pulled my hand free and sat back on my heels.
Lola convulsed with frustration. "No, Sam. Please. I'll tell you. I'll tell you everything if you just promise to fuck me."
That's more like it, I thought, a chance to have my cake and eat it to. "Talk, lips." I unzipped my fly and let my partner out for a look around. She spilled everything - about Cairo and his blackmailing of the judge and the chief inspector. He had a lot of enemies, and now I knew who had taken him down.
My partner agreed it was time to give Lola her reward. "Where do you want it, baby? Top or bottom?" I gave her the choice, but I knew what she would choose.
"Don't make me say it, Sammy," she whined wagging her tail behind her. "Just give it to me. I kept up my end."
And my end was 'up', too but I had to show her who was boss. "Say the words, doll, or Sammy's going to take his partner on the road."
She screamed and cursed, her shoulders heaving as she fought against her bound wrists. Gently, I ran a finger into her hahahaha and brought the juice up the crack in her ass. That was all it took.
"Oh, god, Sam. In the ass. Give it to me in the ass."
Never were sweeter words outside of a Hallmark greetings card. I let my partner slid into her juice bar, then opened her cheeks for the main event. She held her breath as I broke through, then let out a yell that Weismuller could have used to call the elephants. And that's how I did her, like an animal in the jungle, fast, hard and deep. It didn't take long before we both were at the top then it was over like Niagara Falls in a barrel.
Lola collapsed into a heap and I was right on top of her. "Thanks for the info, red. You should know better than to try and hide anything from a private dick."
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I used to write a whole Sam and Lola series that I sold to some mags years ago... I love my noir....
Cyn
