My second adult design ! Feedback please!
 

Hello.. finally made a design.. its still unfinished ( it need more content to be added to the bottom..so please dont tell me that) but overall the idea is kinda there.. what do you guys think?

http://www.lemodesign.com/xxx/images/sexpornmap.jpg

looks like shit imo... :2 cents:

look ok :)

anything you would change to make it look better Pete?

i think its well done, if its your 2nd design, you got talent

I like it.

I would add some more content. (as you mentionned)
preview pics from episodes or something

I think you're giving away too much with the pics..tame it down a bit :2 cents:

nice job man! keep it simple and clean and your on... :)

Main SEX PORN MAP graphic text is tough to read, parhaps change colors or darken.

The rest looks promising.

my question is why would I want to join it? whats the payoff really...? maybe if you made a true scavenger hunt in a different state each month andmade a porn slut teh "prize" that would be interesteing and might get me to join when my month/locatin rolls around.. I know, have members TAPE thier hunt and then take some clips as of it and make it into the hahahaha hunt of the month.... hey-- I kinda like that.. Hmmmm if I only had the cash...

When are you going to pay me for Modelgig.com?

god i hate my typing

Hey Chapecito, contact me via ICQ, we need to talk...

nice site...the "sets/episode" seem to be just floating out there.. maybe if they were grouped together.. say use the map to form a border?

otherwise good work for your 2nd effort

matt

i like the design - good job - theres a brand and the site has a definitive look
in sex porn map the letters e,o,n,a get lost and its hard to read
too many pics in the tour part - run with 6 and the large one

Hey, Chapecito, you're not online yet? Come on dude!
Do you need some work? I have some sites you can do for me :pimp

Hit me up on ICQ

got ya.. if anybody else wants to risk it.. hehe anything goes for 75 dollars ! lol.. unlimited changes

btw.. tomorrow i'll shoot myself

$75 -WTF is wrong with you?

god damn foreigners!

this is my 2nd ever adult design.. of course i want much more than that.. but if i ask for 600 nobady is going to give me any work couse im new.. i have to start somehow.. !

75 Dollars here are 225 Pesos and that's a very good salary here (well, not for a monthly income, but for a design one it's pretty good)

im busting your balls chapy

dont ever undersell yourself.
it fucks you and every other designer.

$75 is lunch in america.

i know and i understand.. but i need money fast and with no adult portfolio to show.. i cant make a single sale on ANYTHING.. nobady wants to risk it.. you guys tell me what to do..