Critique this mainstream design
 

Tear it apart or leave compliments.

http://clients.xcitestudios.com/tgp-drafts/pimpts.gif

look too faggish with all the pink

blue? tan? I'm goin for a pattern that resembles those ugly button-up hawaiin-shirt-style-patterned shirts that are becoming popular again.

remove the background and just add some pizzazzzzzz to the main area's

The logo doesn't look like a pimp but more like a Greaser from Grease and Grease 2. I personally liked Grease 1 better but Michelle Pfifer in 2 was gorgeous...sorry, got side tracked.

I think the logo is off. Change the color and logo and then you'll be headed in the right direction.

It looks real clean though!

:thumbsup:

http://clients.xcitestudios.com/tgp-drafts/pimpts2.gif

Better color? Gotta wait on my illustrator to fix the damn graphic.

Color is A LOT better! :thumbsup

why you show not finished work?

so I can get people's opinions before I finish it?

now you have to make a real pimpin logo there...

The new color looks ok. I think you should look into creating a better logo.