My latest design - unconventional amateur tour :D check it out & comment
 

Tour page 1
Tour page 2
fpa1 - fpa2


btw, it was build for Adult-profit.com


How do you like the design?

comments?

Too much scrolling. :2 cents:

It's my style. I push it 2 years now. The custumer wanted it that way too :)

Ok, too much funky scrolling. It wigs my eyes out. Perhaps that is the future, though! Is up to down straight scrolling dead? Maybe you are onto something new? :)

"funky scrolling" ?

Interesting design. Haven't seen one like that before.

Have you tested it on users yet? Curious to see the results on that.

Way to many splices IMHO

As I was scrolling down, it funked me out. :glugglug

To the point of closing the tour. :2 cents:

Are you saying there's sidways scrolling or something? 'Cause i don't see it. What res are you in?

the eyeflow is all amiss because of the slanted lines. now i'm not sure if that will be a good thing or a bad thing.

it's certainly unique.

props for an original design but I don't really like it, would be interesting to see the results though

I was down scrolling. 800x600

The tour is nice, and I don't mind the scrolling downwards. But it was all angular and shat. Not my cup of tea. It wigged me out. But, it's what the surfer thinks, not what I think.

Cheers! :glugglug

The fact it has too many slices doesn't matter really. Once we were testing a tour with lots of slices, 3000 pixels in height and 800kb in size, and the tour did great. It was a part of the ARS BYOT program which is now discontinued. I sold the tour for $2.3k several months before the ARS program got discontinued.

Anyways, I'll report back how the tour sells...

Reminds me of a picturecollage, maybe just right for an amateursite, show some stats when you got em :)

filesize per page?

- each fpa is max 140 kb I think

- tour page 1 is 380kb, total html + images
- tour page 2 is 160 kb total

I like it, and would be very interested to hear how it does. One thing I noticed though, was the word "sluts" on the first page. If you're pushing them as shy teens and normal girls, then they aren't sluts. You can't have it both ways. Know your niche. :)

Ah, that's a filler text paragraph. The custumers will be placing their own text there. :D

Now where did I see that domain name before :1orglaugh

Nicely done! :thumbsup

I liked it alot. It was strange on the eyes seeing all those angles......but..... At least for me, that made me want to check out the whole thing! Great work.

I dont like it at all.. not my style

nice.. i can't stop looking at the girl above the join here button... totally hot! :winkwink:

I like the design very much, but I think there is too much graphics .. loads too slow :2 cents:

Nice Layout dude :thumbsup
i like it

Originality rocks! http://www.gofuckyourself.com/images.../xyxthumbs.gif

Great work it's good to have something that stands on it's own...

Nice. It's distinct enough that it'll draw some attention. It needs a little work to add depth though - all the images sort of blend together and the eye isn't going to be drawn to any one spot. I'd play with the levels and do some dodging on girls particularly aruond the join buttons to pull attention to them, i.e.

http://www.esbee.net/byot.jpg

Esbee is right in that it needs depth. Not my cup of tea, but good luck with it :thumbsup

I like the design very much. Only thing which I don´t like is the sony camera - it is fucked up: reads "ynos"....

OK, it´s not a big thing, of course.:thumbsup