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Rob 11-21-2004 09:37 AM

Tell Me What You Think About My New Site!
 
Constructive criticism is welcome! This is my new marketing website that is still in develpment. Please let me know what you think. Thanks!

Hooklight Marketing Solutions, LLC

:thumbsup

Pete-KT 11-21-2004 09:39 AM

Kool, looks good acid

Pete-KT


p.s. where are my sample;)

Pete 11-21-2004 09:40 AM

Nice and clean looking.

Rob 11-21-2004 09:41 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Pete-KT
Kool, looks good acid

Pete-KT


p.s. where are my sample;)

LOL - I haven't had the time to put it together yet (all these shows are kicking my ass). I'll have on for you on Monday. :thumbsup

P.S. Thanks for the compliment!

Pete-KT 11-21-2004 09:42 AM

anytime acid im messin with you take your time like i said im not in a hurry, just giving you a hard time

Pete

xclusive 11-21-2004 09:42 AM

I like it but you still have a lot of pages to upload? the my account, services, shopping cart, choose a product, design templates, and forum links are not up. But good start for sure...

fulcrumstudio 11-21-2004 09:45 AM

I get a 404 here...
http://www.hooklight.com/tools.html

Rob 11-21-2004 09:47 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by xclusive
I like it but you still have a lot of pages to upload? the my account, services, shopping cart, choose a product, design templates, and forum links are not up. But good start for sure...
Its a painstakng tast and I'm struggling to get all the pages done. I'm shooting for a launch date of Jan. 1st.

All the pages aren't uploaded yet and some of the links are dupes...I just wanted to get a general response. I plan to put $25k into marketing and advertising so I want to make sure I get it right! :thumbsup

xclusive 11-21-2004 09:49 AM

It's cool man like I said a good start and when It's done it will be great i'm sure. Just like a beta software it's good but once the final product is done is when it really shines. Not to mention I know how busy you are with WA and Internext so close together. Good luck with it man...

Basic_man 11-21-2004 09:53 AM

Looks good. Could be more "professional", but it gives us a good impression ! :thumbsup

Rob 11-21-2004 09:55 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Basic_man
Could be more "professional",...
Please explain. I want you guy's help on making this the best site in my industry and the most complete. It is going to be almost entirely online and not person-to-person so I have to build a professional site that people can trust.

MetaformX 11-21-2004 10:15 AM

Hey Acid, could you get a hold of me bro about those businesscards? I havent heard from you. Email me please: info AT studiocash.com or icq me at 127058515. I just sent you an icq, so u can just add me.

I would appreciate it bro. Thanks :)

sickkittens 11-21-2004 10:35 AM

Not bad. I think you should get crisper and higher res. images to through on there (with more color possibly).:2 cents:

Young 11-21-2004 12:14 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by HighOnAcid
Constructive criticism is welcome! This is my new marketing website that is still in develpment. Please let me know what you think. Thanks!

Hooklight Marketing Solutions, LLC

:thumbsup

Nice clean design. My only suggestion is to change up the hover over. The white outline would look better if it only went halfway around. Keep it on the right side, get rid of the left.

Vitasoy 11-21-2004 12:17 PM

The butterfly pics look blurry. Site gives me a *gloomy* impression.

pussyluver 11-21-2004 12:34 PM

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Originally posted by Vitasoy
The butterfly pics look blurry. Site gives me a *gloomy* impression.
No offense intended - have to agree. The art should be very crisp.

I would also align="justify" all the text.

You know about the broken link I assume in portfolio.

Goodluck.

Rob 11-21-2004 02:40 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by pussyluver
No offense intended - have to agree. The art should be very crisp.

I would also align="justify" all the text.

You know about the broken link I assume in portfolio.

Goodluck.

Great suggestions! That's why I love to get advice from fellow webmasters. Thanks to everyone that contributed so far. :thumbsup

Wiggles 11-21-2004 02:42 PM

looks great, very nice and clean, looks very professional! :)

Rob 11-21-2004 07:03 PM

:thumbsup

Chichio 11-21-2004 07:12 PM

Looks nice. Very professional looking. I'm not sure if you dumped the Lamp Logo idea but I noticed that Pixar's (Finding Nemo) logo was pretty similar.

Warden 11-21-2004 07:14 PM

Great look!

keyboard warrior 11-21-2004 07:55 PM

the header and right tall banner need work.
also fix the top and bottom table borders/ loose them.

BitterPen 11-21-2004 08:07 PM

I like it, but there are a few things that I feel could be made better. I'm not a designer, by any means of the word, but the header lacks originality. Is this going to replace your current site, www.AcidFlyers.com, or is this for something else? Also, since I'm a word freak, I have to mention that this phrase takes something away from your "promise" to the consumer:

"We promise to deliver the best product at a timely manner. Although we cannot control equipment malfunctions we try everything in our power to get your job done quick and right."

Don't mention that you have equipment malfunctions. It makes it sound as though you have old equipment, and they should worry that this could happen to them.

Those are just a couple of suggestions. :thumbsup :2 cents:

Doctor Dre 11-21-2004 08:09 PM

Very honestly I don't like the design too much :) room for improvement . Looks better then acidflyers thought :P

Doctor Dre 11-21-2004 08:10 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by BitterPen
I like it, but there are a few things that I feel could be made better. I'm not a designer, by any means of the word, but the header lacks originality. Is this going to replace your current site, www.AcidFlyers.com, or is this for something else? Also, since I'm a word freak, I have to mention that this phrase takes something away from your "promise" to the consumer:

"We promise to deliver the best product at a timely manner. Although we cannot control equipment malfunctions we try everything in our power to get your job done quick and right."

Don't mention that you have equipment malfunctions. It makes it sound as though you have old equipment, and they should worry that this could happen to them.

Those are just a couple of suggestions. :thumbsup :2 cents:

equipement malfonctions happens all the time in printing ...

BitterPen 11-21-2004 08:13 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Doctor Dre
equipement malfonctions happens all the time in printing ...
Exactly, so why should you have to mention that it does happen? That's my point. :thumbsup

Lykos 11-21-2004 10:00 PM

It looks professional to me,i like it;)


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