Critique LisaSpreads.com's new look
 

I'm currently designing LisaSpreads.com for my friend Lisa, and I came up with this look & feel:
http://www.lisaspreads.com/2.htm
http://www.lisaspreads.com/1.htm

These are just flat JPGs of the PSD files. No text yet.

Please give me your input. Critiques, suggestions, etc.

Thanx!
(There will also be a very amateur tour that will look pretty much like the current holding page: http://www.LisaSpreads.com )



Please be nice, but sincere :)

Hmm... a bit too much orange for my liking, but it's a decent setup :thumbsup

the old one looks more "amateur" than the orange version.

yep


New "design" is crap. And not at all "amateur".

I'd center the page too, on my monitor it's all smushed to the left.

It is to the side, because it is just a big JPG stuck on an HTML page. Done that way just to show the design. Once it is finished, it will be centered, sliced, with texts, mouseovers, etc...

The idea is to have an Amateur and a totally different Professional look, depending on the traffic that will be sent to it. Of course, the white version looks very amateur, that is the idea.

About the colors: I am trying to stay away from the "good girl pinks and light blues". Since she is Hispanic, I'm going for deeper colors, more "ethnic", if there is such a thing.

In deep blue: http://www.lisaspreads.com/3.htm

Does it look better in blue?

thanx!

otherwise, what colors would you recommend? what changes to the site?

Thank you in advance

... amazing what some people call design.

Looks pitiful.

http://www.enterdesignstudio.com/gfy/lisaspreads.jpg



There's a few other things obviously wrong with your 'design' like the hot instant access with the first letter uncapitalized?? and that lisaspreads.com border which is just slapped over the rest of the page.

It needs a LOT of work :2 cents: