What's the Best Poem You've Ever Written?
 

yea, I know asking for poetry on GFY is a joke, but fuck it, I think everyone has written a poem at one time or another, even if it's just bad poetry to impress some chick.

So post the best thing you've ever written here. :winkwink:

its more freestyle rap but jotted this down the other day.....


the world is under lighting and forces of thunder 3rd eye 9th wonder...
quiver and bow hunter life serinity seems to plunder it's got my number...
sitting with some jack blowing ports and relax it all moves to fast...
cerbral syntax mind blown I fade in and out back to black...
cause my matrix is to ill like I swallowed the red and blue pill...
alrenate planes I'm in ethreal moving at light years is sureal...
wisdom living and learning stomach burning and churning....
fake love got me hurting blind to these fake bitches flirting....
virutal online resorts got me pimp still image escorts...

nice freestyle :thumbsup

Here's something I wrote this morning

Falling into you,
Falling into love,
Falling into bed
End over end over end,
Heads or tails, I win?

Drunk on your skin & your scent
Your lips & nether lips effloresce
Legs & Loins Locked
Delirious and delicious
Your sweat, your sweet, your heat
A gift of manna from the Gods?
And I am thankful.

So sick of standing;
Standing up straight,
Standing in line,
Standing for what I believe in,
Standing strong like an infallible wall
And you come smashing through like a wrecking ball
And I crumble into this bed
And melt into you?
We become liquid, fluid motion
The stroke of love like the pulse of the earth
Primordial and electric
And I see my soul in your eyes
And remember my true name?

I want to fall backwards into every bed in the world with you
And the Truth of everything will become clear to us,
If only in these moments?

My cock in your mouth
In your eye my nut
Now lick my ass
Fucking dirty slut

:thumbsup big up for posting your stuff.

i could never post mine on this board. its not the kind of audience that would appreciate it.

Hall of famer right there.

Your arrival is heralded
with a sinking need
I tread to the room of kings and thinkers
and sit upon yon regal chair
you are reluctant, my love
yet your departure imminent, irresistable
a fevered clench, grinding of teeth
I strain through for you
gently, insistently, urging you on
then, in a quiet hush
you leave no void
I savor your aroma,
bid you adieu..... and flush.



I call it: "Ode to a turd"

:1orglaugh Niiiice

He sat before the judge that day
and picked his nose like fury
he rolled it into little balls
and flicked it at the jury.

have a beer
then another

Roses are red
Violets are blue
Shut the fuck up
You fucking jew

King me