strats |
09-08-2004 07:04 AM |
First off, slow down the flash thing. people who will make noticable affectations for this product will be discouraged by the zoom fly zip of the deal. its like assuming im on 32 different drugs and need this product right the fuck now. Wont retain customers.
Replace the exclamation point at bigger and faster results with a period.
replace the exclaimation point on, 'the complete penis enlargement blabla' with a period when the flash is starting.
replace the click here to know more with 'Begin the Adventure!' and have it link to your order page
remove most of the exclaimation points and the hype darken all text a bit more. remove the 'savings' bs. tell them without exclaimation points that system will last them whatever length of time it does. and make that test on the order page rather noticable. no ! points
sizegenetics gives you:
make the benifit text bigger than the rest of the text and a better color.
the only exclaimation points you need on the buy page are for the benifits listings like you have now. do away with the rest. line em up in congruity then make it strictly fucking business, because this is what they want and they WILL go for buy now. a milligram of hype will prevent the purchase from overlapping itself in the realm of the buyer. less hype will make the client feel welcomed. alot of people have smaller screens. ide suggest widening the main space a bit and ide suggest widening the order page with the listed benifits just a bit wider than the rest. also increase the font size a bit overall as well as the others mentioned.
Also some other stuff. forgot tho
O yeah... that contraption? that sells the whole thing man. Just set it up in a classical, respectful manner. it will soar.............
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