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Hello all,

I've been working on a splash page today and i would like to recieve some comments or critisism about it.

The site is: http://www.sairanx.com

The main problem is that my native language is not english and i was wondering if any of the sentences used on the page sounds stupid for americans (the majorety of the potential cotumers)

Thank you,
Jannes

Not bad but black text on dark gray background is hard to read (plus you don't need the "." after the final "...anal sex:")

Everything else looks great & it loads fast. Good luck with it.

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Moongem Erotica Moongem Fiction

Uhh....very sexy http://bbs.gofuckyourself.com/board/wink.gif

I really like the "Woofy Bears" section.

Boneprone should check this site out...he may want you to be part of the Boneprone family!

Boneprone is totaly into Woofy Bears.

[This message has been edited by Exxxotica (edited 05-16-2001).]

The black text is for the se's only. but thanx for the comment.

Exxxotica> there is a niche marked for everything :-)

uhhhhh.

Intresting niche.. Fat, hairy, baldy guys..

If someone is looking for that niche, you would be the place to get the best of that!

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www.boneprone.com
icq: 66883099

DAM!

Gay dudes like Fat, Bald, Hairy guys! That's pretty nasty!

I wonder if there is a nich for Fat, Bald, Hairy women! Now that I could dig!

http://www.exxxotica.net/stuff/sonofrage.jpg

this site is going to be a AVS site built to promote http://www.bearlovin.com/ (chek out the hairy bald guys in their tour :-)

That site is an ARS site so i figured that there should be a marked for that kind of content.

Based on the fact that most webmasters only build websites with content they pesonally like i think that this kind of sites are a bit rare and therefor moneymakers.

But feal free to continue making teen sites, i don't mind...

[This message has been edited by sairanx (edited 05-16-2001).]

I aint diss on ya bro.

I would do gay sites if I had the stomach for it. I hear they do very well. I just wouldnt know what to use as content. I tend to like young studs, like Dr Dre!

Best of luck to ya.


BTW are you Horny Bear from Holland? Do you also run Bizarre Rituals?

no i do not own that site.

just buy a content cd and put everything on your site... not that hard isn't it?

But you are right, i do not know what kind of pictures i should use to marked the site, so i just pikced some pictures at random and used them.
(that's how the bald guy ended up on the splash page :-)

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This would be a little better. You can't ask those guys to check spelling since they seem to be lousy at it. http://bbs.gofuckyourself.com/board/wink.gif http://bbs.gofuckyourself.com/board/biggrin.gif


[This message has been edited by Gemini (edited 05-16-2001).]

how does gay convert these days ?

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Th.HRM
http://www.deluxegirls.com

Thanx Gemini!
I've updated the site.

If you have a gay site, post the url and I'll link to it (from the inside of the page since Cyber Age doesn't allow outside links on the platinum program)


[This message has been edited by sairanx (edited 05-16-2001).]

I have been EATEN!

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