Production and editing
 

I'm looking for constructive criticism (am I crazy or what, on GFY?)
from the professionals, and possibly some extra work. Anyone need help?

Take a look at
Josie and Mike

Dasha Layne

why is he apologizing for cumming in her face? shes on her knees, hes stroking his cock, what else did he think would happen...a little sign pop out that said !!BANG!!

lmao... actually, it was his first shoot, and Josie kept telling him not to cum in her eyes. lol OOOPS

She doesnt want cum in her eye shes in the wrong business. tell her to close her eyes open her mouth and get ready for a suprise.

videos arent bad though, just doesnt seem like the people are into it. Like you said though, first shoot and all. good luck with it though hope it all works out for ya.

I'm actually looking to sell the Josie and Mike Content...

Thanks bro, I honestly appreciate it. I've shot a few other vids since, lol I know now to warn everyone, and prepare them.

lol, unfortunatly Josie is out of the business. She was being recognized way to often on campus, so she shot a few times, made some $$, then got out. Se la vi....