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SleazyDream 06-21-2004 03:30 PM

poem
 
once in a life you meet someone
eyes but touch, impression holds
all others are forgot
and you KNOW

it changes you, and you feel shallow
your life teaters upon a scale
reassured only by a smile
it becomes clear

the future seems so real
yet ohhh so far away
if only i could touch you now
be mine today

others watch, they know so much
why are we so blind to them
if we listened to their meddling thoughs
alas we're deaf

fans and players, night and day
is there really a difference, is morrow made?
Fan critisize, scrutinatise, and stigmatise
players just play

alexg 06-21-2004 03:31 PM

How....umm..................... deep

Jman 06-21-2004 03:33 PM

I Know, I feel the same way for you baby.

dropped9 06-21-2004 03:38 PM

Roses are red
Violets are blue
GFY loves you
and we do too!

dropped9 06-21-2004 03:39 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Headless
Roses are red
Violets are blue
GFY loves you
and we do too!


That was fucking gay.... ahahhaa

Dirty F 06-21-2004 03:40 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by SleazyDream
once in a life you meet someone
eyes but touch, impression holds
all others are forgot
and you KNOW

it changes you, and you feel shallow
your life teaters upon a scale
reassured only by a smile
it becomes clear

the future seems so real
yet ohhh so far away
if only i could touch you now
be mine today

others watch, they know so much
why are we so blind to them
if we listened to their meddling thoughs
alas we're deaf

fans and players, night and day
is there really a difference, is morrow made?
Fan critisize, scrutinatise, and stigmatise
players just play

Its stigmatize.

SleazyDream 06-21-2004 03:49 PM

i wrote that poem over 10 years ago- before i met my wife - never felt it applied to her though, and never showed it to her - weird.

SleazyDream 06-21-2004 03:50 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Battuss
Its stigmatize.
hint, you're an 'other'

Elli 06-21-2004 04:16 PM

Wow, that's very good, imo.

Jill_J 06-21-2004 04:22 PM

really deep poem...:thumbsup

SleazyDream 06-21-2004 05:37 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Jill_J
really deep poem...:thumbsup
what makes you think it's deep?

Mr. Marks 06-21-2004 08:12 PM

amaxing. round of applause.:)


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