critique these 2 sites please
 

I have been trying something diferant with 2 new domains i got

I basically made these 2 blogs into daily updated tgps. once traffic gets up ill start taking submitions but until i have a decent list of submits its pointless

They have been live for maybe 5 weeks, www.justblown.com is getting some google traffic to pages on it (doorways and galleries) and www.blowndry.com isnt yet, but next update it will be

Both are listed in dmoz (4days after applying they were approved)
i was expecting both to begin with a PR4 or PR5 ranking but only justblown made it.

Anyways...trash them below please....any info is good info!

you got some impresive traffic trades there, does the hun take traffic trades?

loose the shemale banner at the top, put a cumshot sponsor instead

trade with cumshot sites to get the productivity higher

good point...actually the shemale banner is in rotation.,..i forgot they were in there.

And i dont trade with the hun but instead due to the nature of what makes blogs popular with the SE is the linking. Most of the sites listed have links back to me but i also listed some of the big sites blowjob archives as a link out. a link out to relevant pages

Im doin up the logos for the 2 sites today. That will aid in the design greatly

first one - GOOG
second one - GOOD to

great job dude :thumbsup

I dont know much about blogs, but wouldnt it be best just to trade with cumshot sites?

Yes blowndry.com is intended to be bj/cumshot and the majority of the links go to sites bj pages.

Oh and theres a bunch that go to some of my other tgps, or friends who helped me out befor. But if it wasnt for those links to my existing stuff i wouldnt have made dmoz or google in less them a month (least not in my opinion)

I actually have some SE pages i did a little over 4 weeks ago doing 1/20 to 1/30 with its traffic..heh fuckin beautiful!

Nothing special.. but they should do alright for ya I suppose. :)

Define good traffic... That's very relative wording. I'd say the Hun gets good traffic. :)