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I swore I would never do this... but
I have extra Prozac at the ready.......
I have just started on a ARS Champs site and I would like some feedback!?! http://www.housewifesexpics.com/ Ignore the domain.... just needed someplace to put it Its the first time I have tried this type of site so be gentle.... constructive critisism only please (who am I kidding?) Thanks :) |
the url tricked me into looking at gay sex:(
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Oh yea WARNING.... Its a gay site!! :)
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lol
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Im sure u arnt all that squeamish about a bit of gay sex??
And was that lol at my site :( or at the others getting duped into thinking they were going to get some free MILF? |
A gay site?:glugglug
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OK...> So now we have worked out it is a gay site.....
But is it OK? Feedback please!! :) |
the domain got me hard the content got me soft
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Looks alright.. the 1 pixel outline around the text looks a little fucked up.. I'd go 2-3 pixels. :)
I can't comment on the content.. :Graucho |
With that domain show some guys being 'housewifes' :)
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The domain was just a place to put it..... It will be hosted by ars when it goes live BTW.... the domain is for sale :) |
I agree that you should try a 2 pixel stroke, but my main observation is that you are selling high-quality DVD movies (okay, so in some the production values aren't great, but generally the standard is pretty high) via some fairly low-quality images.
It isn't the easiest thing to get decent looking pics from the screen caps CHAMP provide you with, but this program has no trial, so IMO you really do need to put some work into color- and level-balancing the thumbs. Next, you talk about a "massive online collection" but only mention two movies (and I didn't see you say anywhere that these are full-length movies). Maybe you planned a longer page or more pages, but anyway, work in some info about more of the content that is available. To be really nit-picking, my choice for a media player frame would be for one of the new skins. The one you used is very old (reminiscent of the dialer thumbs on some TGPs) and it might impact negatively on some of your surfers. ...and I assume you are going to do some serious optimization before you submit the site. |
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As I said its my first one so all this stuff is great advise |
Damn cool gay site!
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Is this your first site or your first gay site?
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Not bad!
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Not bad! yes..and no more...
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