how to make this sell

Make an actual tour.. nothing there but a splash page and a few pics..

Get rid of the annoying flash graphic too. Dont try to re-invent the wheel. There are a lot of successful amateur sites out there to inspire you.

That's true. I didn't even notice there was no tour. ..

hmmm.. maybe a bio or something, to make it feel more personal?

Hosted galleries

Ok, ya know what..... I'm going to stay positive and take it as you meaning well, but I'm a little annoyed.
That is my site, I am right in the middle of a number of changes that she was told about as well, wether Lexy was listening to me is another story~LOL..... anywho........... I have just finished getting all my sites moved to new dedicated server with wonderful management, and I just installed the content management software a week ago and had to reload ALL content from two sites and do QUICK TEMP redesigns just to fit the system so I could uatalize it right away and not manually still do updates while I have to reload them anyway.......
Today I took a brief break to do major updates for the affiliate program, I added 4 new hosted galleries and I made Lexy's site now available in both nude and non nude versions in 4 sizes!!

My point is, while I apreciate you looking out for my girl Lexy, I'm not exactly sitting here with my finger up my ass, and I hate getting IM's telling me that someone I don't even know is asking for ideas on what I should do for my site.

I am working on increased sales techniques and increased member retention, and even while only still in the middle of it sales and rebills are already up.

Again, I'm sorry to come off like a prick, I'm really a rather pleasant guy, but I'm exhausted and this thread rubbed me the wrong way.

And let me also say I am in no way coming off with the "I know best" attitude, I'm open to all suggestions and whatnot but geez, let ME ask them.

Sounds like shit you should take up with your girl.... no us. So what is she making now? I really want to know i'm thinking about starting up a few single girl sites and want to know how bad it can be at first.

get a professionally designed tour

remember, the first impression is a VERY important thing

different font on the text at the bottom. that fucking shit hurts my eyes.

I think Lexi's members want to watch me fucking her

also replace that shitty flash with some inviting pictures. that shit also hurts my eyes.... less busy more sexy.

needs a good tour...hit me up

Again, sorry, didn't mean to take it out on anyone, just hit me at the wrong time!~LOL

And the site is actually doing well considering it only opened in March. A big problem was a really bad situation with the server a month ago and the site, ALL my sites were down for 4 fucking days.....THAT HURT!!! And it took a few weeks to really regroup and whatnot, affiliates had to reaasured this wouldn't continue and whatnot, so I imediately set up with a great server managent company and moved all the sites.
This is NOT an ordinary situation, that's why I just got pissed that this was even being brought up without me. Lexy said she only asked what they thought of the site, not for outside "help".
I personally think that single girl sites are fantastic with a good diversity in your program. I may not be rich yet, but this IS my full time job and I'm earning a living and paying girls, partner, and company acct, so it aint as bad as you may think!~LOL

And thank you all for the input!!
Yeah, I don't know why I put that flash there, I actually make it a rule not to use flash on any of my sites, but this time I thought I'd give it a whirl to see........well.........not sure what I was supposed to see actually!~LMAO

As far as design, now that I have freed up some time with the content management system I feel confident that I can get a very design done. Again last month and this turnover to the new software has just been battle conditions!~LOL

Fisrt of all, free-tour - less pics and info about girl and background colour is awfull...
The second - fhg-s - the best way to promote site
good luck

Ha!
Your website also do not work...