ArikaAmes.com scolling tour page critique requested please!

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  • newbreed
    Confirmed User
    • Nov 2003
    • 9898

    #1

    ArikaAmes.com scolling tour page critique requested please!

    Lemme have it.

    http://arikaames.com/tour1.html

    Thanks,
    Bill

    Loryn ‎(3:16 PM):
    I love it, just as long as we keep the bedroom door closed from all ears then we can have throw down hard core sex that makes us money haha
    fuck it we can have sex on money never did that before
  • TheFrog
    Confirmed User
    • Jan 2004
    • 4095

    #2
    looks awesome, and shes hot

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    • newbreed
      Confirmed User
      • Nov 2003
      • 9898

      #3
      Originally posted by TheFrog
      looks awesome, and shes hot
      Thanks and... Thanks!

      Loryn ‎(3:16 PM):
      I love it, just as long as we keep the bedroom door closed from all ears then we can have throw down hard core sex that makes us money haha
      fuck it we can have sex on money never did that before

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      • KaLi
        Confirmed User
        • Aug 2003
        • 4371

        #4
        Not too shabby, good work

        icq:160-417-630

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        • latinasojourn
          Confirmed User
          • Oct 2003
          • 3191

          #5
          Originally posted by newbreed
          Lemme have it.

          http://arikaames.com/tour1.html

          Thanks,
          Bill

          there are a couple schools on thought on the marketing aspects of a scrolling index page.

          true, you will get more 2nd page hits if you don't scroll.

          but let's suppose that you have a very niche website, and within your visitor section you have lots of high quality sample content that will only appeal to that niche, and this content is heavy, BW wise.

          then it makes sense to scroll your index page---so that the surfer is forced to wade through some stuff (qualifying stuff) before he clicks the enter button. this increases your conversion ratio.

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          • FuckFind
            Confirmed User
            • Feb 2003
            • 1188

            #6
            Originally posted by newbreed
            Lemme have it.

            http://arikaames.com/tour1.html

            Thanks,
            Bill
            God, that is sick as shit.......... you should really consider eatting shit and jumping off the nearest building.

            FF!

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            • newbreed
              Confirmed User
              • Nov 2003
              • 9898

              #7
              Originally posted by FuckFind
              God, that is sick as shit.......... you should really consider eatting shit and jumping off the nearest building.

              FF!
              When sre you going to bring back by thong?

              Loryn ‎(3:16 PM):
              I love it, just as long as we keep the bedroom door closed from all ears then we can have throw down hard core sex that makes us money haha
              fuck it we can have sex on money never did that before

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              • FuckFind
                Confirmed User
                • Feb 2003
                • 1188

                #8
                Originally posted by newbreed
                When sre you going to bring back by thong?

                As soon as you get your huge list of needs completed for my return (yes yes bitches, in Daytona Beach!)

                I'm off for more sun/bitches/beverages..

                peace out you two :-)

                FF

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                • newbreed
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                  • Nov 2003
                  • 9898

                  #9
                  Originally posted by FuckFind
                  As soon as you get your huge list of needs completed for my return (yes yes bitches, in Daytona Beach!)

                  I'm off for more sun/bitches/beverages..

                  peace out you two :-)

                  FF
                  Ohhhh, my list of neeeeeddddsssss? Now you're playing Mr. Sensitive?
                  Last edited by newbreed; 05-06-2004, 10:50 AM.

                  Loryn ‎(3:16 PM):
                  I love it, just as long as we keep the bedroom door closed from all ears then we can have throw down hard core sex that makes us money haha
                  fuck it we can have sex on money never did that before

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                  • newbreed
                    Confirmed User
                    • Nov 2003
                    • 9898

                    #10
                    Originally posted by latinasojourn
                    there are a couple schools on thought on the marketing aspects of a scrolling index page.

                    true, you will get more 2nd page hits if you don't scroll.

                    but let's suppose that you have a very niche website, and within your visitor section you have lots of high quality sample content that will only appeal to that niche, and this content is heavy, BW wise.

                    then it makes sense to scroll your index page---so that the surfer is forced to wade through some stuff (qualifying stuff) before he clicks the enter button. this increases your conversion ratio.
                    This is the second page. I should have been more clear on that. I will have a splash/warning/enter/qualifying page on the main url, and when the surfer clicks to enter he/she will go to this page. From this page they will go to a join page.

                    Loryn ‎(3:16 PM):
                    I love it, just as long as we keep the bedroom door closed from all ears then we can have throw down hard core sex that makes us money haha
                    fuck it we can have sex on money never did that before

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                    • LadyMischief
                      Orgasms N Such!
                      • Sep 2002
                      • 18135

                      #11
                      There's quite a few typos and spelling errors. hit me up on icq 3522039 and I can help you if you want.

                      ICQ 3522039
                      Content Manager - orgasm.com
                      [email protected]

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                      • newbreed
                        Confirmed User
                        • Nov 2003
                        • 9898

                        #12
                        Originally posted by KaLi
                        Not too shabby, good work
                        Thanks KaLi! The layout and general design is all her's, i just put the mouse to the screen for her.

                        LadyM, thanks again for your help!

                        Loryn ‎(3:16 PM):
                        I love it, just as long as we keep the bedroom door closed from all ears then we can have throw down hard core sex that makes us money haha
                        fuck it we can have sex on money never did that before

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                        • dunefield
                          www.barely18movies.com
                          • Feb 2003
                          • 10920

                          #13
                          loads slowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww...

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                          • detoxed
                            vip member
                            • Jan 2003
                            • 17798

                            #14
                            more pics of her would do well

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                            • Digipimp
                              BP4L OT DL
                              • Mar 2003
                              • 13481

                              #15
                              Nice stuff, I'm glad the tour is censored. But tell me the truth, Arika kind of wants me doesn't she?

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                              • abyss_al
                                **LOOKING FOR TRADES**
                                • Oct 2003
                                • 15605

                                #16
                                Originally posted by FuckFind
                                God, that is sick as shit.......... you should really consider eatting shit and jumping off the nearest building.

                                FF!
                                thats what i thought.... for a hot chick like that - she deserves a better design!

                                needs alot of work...colors,alignment, fonts...etc
                                EMAIL: allen @ vasmediagroup.com | ICQ: 311329761 | SKYPE: abyss.al | AIM: xABYSSxALx

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                                • newbreed
                                  Confirmed User
                                  • Nov 2003
                                  • 9898

                                  #17
                                  Originally posted by Digipimp
                                  Nice stuff, I'm glad the tour is censored. But tell me the truth, Arika kind of wants me doesn't she?

                                  Hey man, just because I put you on ignore under her nick doesn't mean you couldn't have had something...

                                  j/k man, she turns red when she reads your replies to and about her, thank man!

                                  Loryn ‎(3:16 PM):
                                  I love it, just as long as we keep the bedroom door closed from all ears then we can have throw down hard core sex that makes us money haha
                                  fuck it we can have sex on money never did that before

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                                  • LadyMischief
                                    Orgasms N Such!
                                    • Sep 2002
                                    • 18135

                                    #18
                                    Originally posted by newbreed
                                    Thanks KaLi! The layout and general design is all her's, i just put the mouse to the screen for her.

                                    LadyM, thanks again for your help!
                                    No problem! Hit me up again if you need anything else.

                                    ICQ 3522039
                                    Content Manager - orgasm.com
                                    [email protected]

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                                    • newbreed
                                      Confirmed User
                                      • Nov 2003
                                      • 9898

                                      #19
                                      Originally posted by abyss_al
                                      thats what i thought.... for a hot chick like that - she deserves a better design!

                                      needs alot of work...colors,alignment, fonts...etc
                                      abyss, he was kinda joking with me. This is the concept she chose to go with for the site release. A re-design will happen in a couple of months. We are not completely done with this concept, just out of ideas to the point where we wanted some professional outside opinions.

                                      Loryn ‎(3:16 PM):
                                      I love it, just as long as we keep the bedroom door closed from all ears then we can have throw down hard core sex that makes us money haha
                                      fuck it we can have sex on money never did that before

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                                      • Digipimp
                                        BP4L OT DL
                                        • Mar 2003
                                        • 13481

                                        #20
                                        Originally posted by newbreed
                                        Hey man, just because I put you on ignore under her nick doesn't mean you couldn't have had something...

                                        j/k man, she turns red when she reads your replies to and about her, thank man!
                                        you bastard, i knew there had to be a good reason she ignored everything i typed.

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                                        • abyss_al
                                          **LOOKING FOR TRADES**
                                          • Oct 2003
                                          • 15605

                                          #21
                                          Originally posted by newbreed
                                          abyss, he was kinda joking with me. This is the concept she chose to go with for the site release. A re-design will happen in a couple of months. We are not completely done with this concept, just out of ideas to the point where we wanted some professional outside opinions.
                                          give me 15 minutes..i'll redesign and post it here
                                          EMAIL: allen @ vasmediagroup.com | ICQ: 311329761 | SKYPE: abyss.al | AIM: xABYSSxALx

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                                          • Illicit
                                            wtf ?
                                            • Dec 2003
                                            • 11895

                                            #22
                                            Arika is such a hottie... becoming my favorite miss gfy
                                            Insert Sig Here

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                                            • newbreed
                                              Confirmed User
                                              • Nov 2003
                                              • 9898

                                              #23
                                              Originally posted by Digipimp
                                              you bastard, i knew there had to be a good reason she ignored everything i typed.
                                              Actually, she has wanted lately to rply more than ever to people, but all the spammy shit from some other people has kept her from really coming out as much as I think she should.

                                              Also, someone is posting under a nick very close to yours and it's tough to tell sometimes...

                                              Loryn ‎(3:16 PM):
                                              I love it, just as long as we keep the bedroom door closed from all ears then we can have throw down hard core sex that makes us money haha
                                              fuck it we can have sex on money never did that before

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                                              • Digipimp
                                                BP4L OT DL
                                                • Mar 2003
                                                • 13481

                                                #24
                                                Originally posted by newbreed
                                                Actually, she has wanted lately to rply more than ever to people, but all the spammy shit from some other people has kept her from really coming out as much as I think she should.

                                                Also, someone is posting under a nick very close to yours and it's tough to tell sometimes...
                                                yeah just another guy trying to ride my back to a little fame. it's all good you can just give her my cell number

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                                                • newbreed
                                                  Confirmed User
                                                  • Nov 2003
                                                  • 9898

                                                  #25
                                                  Originally posted by dunefield
                                                  loads slowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww...
                                                  We still need to optimize. We are on a 6mbit connection, so it's kinda hard to judge the DL speed. We have asked some other people to try it and they have said it is OK but they are on DSL and cable at 1.5 down.

                                                  Loryn ‎(3:16 PM):
                                                  I love it, just as long as we keep the bedroom door closed from all ears then we can have throw down hard core sex that makes us money haha
                                                  fuck it we can have sex on money never did that before

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                                                  • newbreed
                                                    Confirmed User
                                                    • Nov 2003
                                                    • 9898

                                                    #26
                                                    Originally posted by ajpiii
                                                    Arika is such a hottie... becoming my favorite miss gfy
                                                    Thanks man, and thanks for all your kind words... You are another one of them that makes her blush!

                                                    Loryn ‎(3:16 PM):
                                                    I love it, just as long as we keep the bedroom door closed from all ears then we can have throw down hard core sex that makes us money haha
                                                    fuck it we can have sex on money never did that before

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                                                    • newbreed
                                                      Confirmed User
                                                      • Nov 2003
                                                      • 9898

                                                      #27
                                                      Originally posted by Digipimp
                                                      yeah just another guy trying to ride my back to a little fame. it's all good you can just give her my cell number

                                                      Yeah, I had to point out that everyone of his posts ends with "fucko".

                                                      And as far as your number... All you guys get her hot and bothered everyday with your words, etc. I've been meaning to thank you all for a long time, it has definitely increased the "personal attention" I have recieved lately!!!

                                                      Loryn ‎(3:16 PM):
                                                      I love it, just as long as we keep the bedroom door closed from all ears then we can have throw down hard core sex that makes us money haha
                                                      fuck it we can have sex on money never did that before

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                                                      • abyss_al
                                                        **LOOKING FOR TRADES**
                                                        • Oct 2003
                                                        • 15605

                                                        #28
                                                        almost done...
                                                        EMAIL: allen @ vasmediagroup.com | ICQ: 311329761 | SKYPE: abyss.al | AIM: xABYSSxALx

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                                                        • newbreed
                                                          Confirmed User
                                                          • Nov 2003
                                                          • 9898

                                                          #29
                                                          Originally posted by abyss_al
                                                          almost done...
                                                          Cool

                                                          Loryn ‎(3:16 PM):
                                                          I love it, just as long as we keep the bedroom door closed from all ears then we can have throw down hard core sex that makes us money haha
                                                          fuck it we can have sex on money never did that before

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                                                          • NickPapageorgio
                                                            Confirmed User
                                                            • Apr 2004
                                                            • 8323

                                                            #30
                                                            I found myself trying to concentrate on reading the hard to read text more than actually paying attention to what was inside.

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                                                            • NickPapageorgio
                                                              Confirmed User
                                                              • Apr 2004
                                                              • 8323

                                                              #31
                                                              Other than the text though the site looks good.

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                                                              • newbreed
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                                                                • Nov 2003
                                                                • 9898

                                                                #32
                                                                Originally posted by NickPapageorgio
                                                                Other than the text though the site looks good.
                                                                Yeah, I knew the text wasn't as clear as it should have been. We got a new font that will be much better. Also, abyss_al is doing a quickie for us...

                                                                Loryn ‎(3:16 PM):
                                                                I love it, just as long as we keep the bedroom door closed from all ears then we can have throw down hard core sex that makes us money haha
                                                                fuck it we can have sex on money never did that before

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                                                                • Digipimp
                                                                  BP4L OT DL
                                                                  • Mar 2003
                                                                  • 13481

                                                                  #33
                                                                  Originally posted by newbreed
                                                                  Yeah, I had to point out that everyone of his posts ends with "fucko".

                                                                  And as far as your number... All you guys get her hot and bothered everyday with your words, etc. I've been meaning to thank you all for a long time, it has definitely increased the "personal attention" I have recieved lately!!!
                                                                  denied again



                                                                  don't think i'm defeated yet though

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                                                                  • abyss_al
                                                                    **LOOKING FOR TRADES**
                                                                    • Oct 2003
                                                                    • 15605

                                                                    #34
                                                                    5 more minutes....
                                                                    EMAIL: allen @ vasmediagroup.com | ICQ: 311329761 | SKYPE: abyss.al | AIM: xABYSSxALx

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                                                                    • newbreed
                                                                      Confirmed User
                                                                      • Nov 2003
                                                                      • 9898

                                                                      #35
                                                                      Originally posted by abyss_al
                                                                      5 more minutes....
                                                                      K

                                                                      Loryn ‎(3:16 PM):
                                                                      I love it, just as long as we keep the bedroom door closed from all ears then we can have throw down hard core sex that makes us money haha
                                                                      fuck it we can have sex on money never did that before

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                                                                      • matty
                                                                        Mining for Porn!
                                                                        • Aug 2002
                                                                        • 1328

                                                                        #36
                                                                        looks fucking great and so does she
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                                                                        • newbreed
                                                                          Confirmed User
                                                                          • Nov 2003
                                                                          • 9898

                                                                          #37
                                                                          Originally posted by matty
                                                                          looks fucking great and so does she
                                                                          Thanks Matty!

                                                                          Loryn ‎(3:16 PM):
                                                                          I love it, just as long as we keep the bedroom door closed from all ears then we can have throw down hard core sex that makes us money haha
                                                                          fuck it we can have sex on money never did that before

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                                                                          • newbreed
                                                                            Confirmed User
                                                                            • Nov 2003
                                                                            • 9898

                                                                            #38
                                                                            abyss, I gotta take off for a bit. I'll be back in a few and I'll check this thread when I get back!

                                                                            Thanks again,
                                                                            Bill

                                                                            Loryn ‎(3:16 PM):
                                                                            I love it, just as long as we keep the bedroom door closed from all ears then we can have throw down hard core sex that makes us money haha
                                                                            fuck it we can have sex on money never did that before

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                                                                            • abyss_al
                                                                              **LOOKING FOR TRADES**
                                                                              • Oct 2003
                                                                              • 15605

                                                                              #39
                                                                              uploading....
                                                                              EMAIL: allen @ vasmediagroup.com | ICQ: 311329761 | SKYPE: abyss.al | AIM: xABYSSxALx

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                                                                              • newbreed
                                                                                Confirmed User
                                                                                • Nov 2003
                                                                                • 9898

                                                                                #40
                                                                                Originally posted by abyss_al
                                                                                uploading....
                                                                                Cool.

                                                                                Loryn ‎(3:16 PM):
                                                                                I love it, just as long as we keep the bedroom door closed from all ears then we can have throw down hard core sex that makes us money haha
                                                                                fuck it we can have sex on money never did that before

                                                                                Comment

                                                                                • C-Bass
                                                                                  Confirmed User
                                                                                  • Apr 2003
                                                                                  • 3153

                                                                                  #41
                                                                                  Arika is hot
                                                                                  "Unhappy with the riches 'cause you're piss poor morally."

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                                                                                  • newbreed
                                                                                    Confirmed User
                                                                                    • Nov 2003
                                                                                    • 9898

                                                                                    #42
                                                                                    Originally posted by Spotter_03
                                                                                    Arika is hot
                                                                                    Thanks man!

                                                                                    Loryn ‎(3:16 PM):
                                                                                    I love it, just as long as we keep the bedroom door closed from all ears then we can have throw down hard core sex that makes us money haha
                                                                                    fuck it we can have sex on money never did that before

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                                                                                    • abyss_al
                                                                                      **LOOKING FOR TRADES**
                                                                                      • Oct 2003
                                                                                      • 15605

                                                                                      #43
                                                                                      it's not fully done....still needs work..but i did say 15 minutes...i think it was more like 20..here it goes:

                                                                                      EMAIL: allen @ vasmediagroup.com | ICQ: 311329761 | SKYPE: abyss.al | AIM: xABYSSxALx

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                                                                                      • abyss_al
                                                                                        **LOOKING FOR TRADES**
                                                                                        • Oct 2003
                                                                                        • 15605

                                                                                        #44
                                                                                        i touched up the pictures too...they were hard to see
                                                                                        EMAIL: allen @ vasmediagroup.com | ICQ: 311329761 | SKYPE: abyss.al | AIM: xABYSSxALx

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                                                                                        • newbreed
                                                                                          Confirmed User
                                                                                          • Nov 2003
                                                                                          • 9898

                                                                                          #45
                                                                                          Originally posted by abyss_al
                                                                                          it's not fully done....still needs work..but i did say 15 minutes...i think it was more like 20..here it goes:

                                                                                          Sweet. Layout is simpler, that may be better. I'll show her when she gets home!

                                                                                          Thanks man,
                                                                                          Bill

                                                                                          Loryn ‎(3:16 PM):
                                                                                          I love it, just as long as we keep the bedroom door closed from all ears then we can have throw down hard core sex that makes us money haha
                                                                                          fuck it we can have sex on money never did that before

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                                                                                          • abyss_al
                                                                                            **LOOKING FOR TRADES**
                                                                                            • Oct 2003
                                                                                            • 15605

                                                                                            #46
                                                                                            Originally posted by newbreed
                                                                                            Sweet. Layout is simpler, that may be better. I'll show her when she gets home!

                                                                                            Thanks man,
                                                                                            Bill
                                                                                            EMAIL: allen @ vasmediagroup.com | ICQ: 311329761 | SKYPE: abyss.al | AIM: xABYSSxALx

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                                                                                            • boone
                                                                                              Registered User
                                                                                              • Mar 2004
                                                                                              • 20

                                                                                              #47
                                                                                              I like it you jsut need to optimize your pics though or get better hosting. It took a while for all the picturees to load. Nice body and very cute though.

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                                                                                              • overlord
                                                                                                Confirmed User
                                                                                                • Dec 2003
                                                                                                • 3670

                                                                                                #48
                                                                                                Good start. Whichever of the two designs above you use, I would recommend at least one larger face/personality pic to replace one of the T&A shots.

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