My first gallery
 

My first gallery

Want constructive criticism

http://www.teenpointer.com/gallery/guysluckyday/

:glugglug

you might want to add some text under your logo about what the site is about and make the enter text at the bottom bigger and say more like "CLICK HERE TO SEE MORE GIRLS WITH THIS LUCKY GUY' etc...

hey it loads fast

300-500kb per pic?
man you must be rich!:glugglug

umm do you need some help mate?

Text! Tell me about the site. Make me want to click that sponsor link!

holy crap just noticed that... dude open these pics in paint shop pro or something and hahahahahaha them and save them as jpegs with some compression get them down to 70k range

I just want to know what looks good.

And what design to use to get listed at the best tgps

:Graucho

But sponsor say that I'm not allowed to change size of pics.

Is it's okay ?

You really need to get those images down to 30kb or so each, or your bandwith bill is gonna be killer.Why should they join when they can get such hi quality pics for free?! Also, add something to break up the pics a lil like some text. You want them to join, not look at pics:winkwink: It sure does load fast, thats good. Also, some tpgs dislike writing on pics. I dont like how you have writing on some, but not others. GGGGGGGREAT first try though:)

1) First of all -- FUCK the haterz. Don't let them get you down


2) Use a simpler header -- maybe use differing pics of bitches


3) Good job on the clean background. Put a block of 20 to 24 pics there

4) Use more hardcore--don't show cum shot


5) Show at least 6 thumbs of the bitches' faces

6) In your CALL TO ACTION, show pics of other chicks and pics of them in action.


7) SELL SELL SELL fuck what it looks like, it must communicate HARD that the user can see more of this shit and they gotta Sign the fuck up

Get yourself a copy of thubmsplus to reduce the size of the larger images (free for 14 days)

amount of kb should be in the range of 30-100 kb
width 500-600
lenght 500-800

what everybody above these words said :(

:warning Disable your open dir :warning

http://www.teenpointer.com/gallery/

Nice content:glugglug

I bet the hun would list that :)

Congrats to everybody on the way feedback is given in this thread. Nobody bashing.
Very cool!:)

I am no designer or gallery maker but I have to say that I can't see anything eye catching.I give you just 1 * out of 5 :glugglug

You need to entice the viewer to join the site, or at least click the sponser link. They need to know what they can expect at the site, what the premise is and anything else that'll make the user want to check the site out.

ALso, the image sizes are a little large. The number of pictures is perfect and the quality is very nice.

Good luck with it! :thumbsup

ok here we go:

- change the logo and don't link it to the join page because you're not telling what they're getting at your gallery you need to send them trough the tour.

OR:

- change the logo to one matching the tour, change the bg to the colour of the tour.

- make some lines of text between the thumbs, make them horny and let them click.

- reduce the pic size.

- 10kb for a thumb is also way to big, make it max 7kb.

- or click the link in my sig and I will make u one that will convert :glugglug

Def some text..... helps it picked up by the SEs as well

yo, looks like your first gallery, so whats wrong? :Graucho

Hi and welcome it's allways nice with new swedish webmasters
and good luck:thumbsup