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eroswebmaster 04-17-2004 01:37 PM

Critique This TGP Please
 
http://www.eroswebmaster.com/tgp/1/tgp.html

If you're interested you can have the full design including the domain name for $150.00

I can alter it to suit your needs.

nathan_f 04-17-2004 01:39 PM

nice job as always. :thumbsup

Manowar 04-17-2004 01:40 PM

really like the design, someone should pick this up. Looks good for a trading tgp

MrIzzz 04-17-2004 01:40 PM

eros is gonna be making some nice TGPsssssssssssss:thumbsup

Pipecrew 04-17-2004 01:44 PM

-HOF should be at the top
-not a fan of the domain name, if it was something else, it would be good. Just find a better name and redo the logo and it will sell

TheMob 04-17-2004 01:54 PM

will it tie in with autogallery?

michel 04-17-2004 01:57 PM

I like it!

Weppel 04-17-2004 01:58 PM

I would equally space out the thumbs (eg. don't use 4px between every thumb in length, when you're leaving 20px between every thumb in width).

Other than that: great one!

J-Reel 04-17-2004 01:59 PM

That's one hell of a Deal.

Nice work Eros :thumbsup

Spunky 04-17-2004 01:59 PM

Not bad at all...Too bad I hate pink :throwup

eroswebmaster 04-17-2004 02:07 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Weppel
I would equally space out the thumbs (eg. don't use 4px between every thumb in length, when you're leaving 20px between every thumb in width).

Other than that: great one!

Good point...I corrected it.

r0nin 04-17-2004 02:21 PM

nice job :thumbsup

i personally don't like the top header,
i'd try to put all the weight of the image on the right, to balance the whole layout, u can notice that it's mostly balanced to the left on the days sections

and might argue the 'contrastability' between pink and yellow,

not a hater here man, just pointing my thoughts

u seem to know what u're doing (i checked your portfolio and liked the stuff)

improve your techniques, don't just stick to photoshop, it might get boring and get u stuck

peace

(excuse my english, please)

Za Ha 04-17-2004 02:22 PM

headers too big
but nice job

zentz 04-17-2004 02:22 PM

look nice

DreamCumTrue 04-17-2004 02:24 PM

why is it pink?

eroswebmaster 04-17-2004 02:28 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Za Ha
headers too big
but nice job

Thx...the logo can always be hahahahahahad.

eroswebmaster 04-17-2004 02:28 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by r0nin
nice job :thumbsup

i personally don't like the top header,
i'd try to put all the weight of the image on the right, to balance the whole layout, u can notice that it's mostly balanced to the left on the days sections

and might argue the 'contrastability' between pink and yellow,

not a hater here man, just pointing my thoughts

u seem to know what u're doing (i checked your portfolio and liked the stuff)

improve your techniques, don't just stick to photoshop, it might get boring and get u stuck

peace

(excuse my english, please)

I appreciate your comments..but just didn't get the part about not sticking to photoshop.

eroswebmaster 04-17-2004 02:29 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by DreamCumTrue
why is it pink?
Well I was going for a cotton candy type feel...and it is a teen tgp so pastels seemed to fit better.

Sosa 04-17-2004 02:30 PM

looks good :thumbsup

Nismo 04-17-2004 02:43 PM

How much do you charge for something like that?

eroswebmaster 04-17-2004 02:45 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Nismo
How much do you charge for something like that?
Hit me up on ICQ: 127027910

devilspost 04-17-2004 03:48 PM

If those are supposed to be candy wrappers they could look better.

I like the font and colors for Candy Coated :) very nice


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