please review my freesite
 

http://chloe-jones.lovelyjenna.net/

what should I add or remove??
thanks in advance

Very clean site I like it how it looks

dont change the backround color... from page to page..
all pages needs to be the same color i mean backround color... include the warning page...:thumbsup

That and put alt tags on your images on the second page. Other than that it's pretty good.

I like the contrasting colors!

i would list it like that

Hi Heat


A couple of things that struck me!!

http://chloe-jones.lovelyjenna.net/

you hva e no exit link on the site!! there has to be a clear exit link hopefully going to something mainstream that you can profit from aswell!!

http://chloe-jones.lovelyjenna.net/main.htm

Try and add a bit more text in to set the illusion into the surfers mind!

http://chloe-jones.lovelyjenna.net/g...hloe-jones.htm

Takes ages to load and I'm using a satellite connection!! must surfers aare still using dial - up!!

All you really need is text, 2 banners and the pics!! you should try and use 10 pics per page!! remember you you do not what them to be able to jack off at your site!! It's supposed to be a teaser with the view of getting them hot and horny to the point they'll whip out the cc and sign up wuth your sponsor!!

It also looks like you have used the graphics from FHG!!!

http://chloe-jones.lovelyjenna.net/g...hloe-jones.htm

Have a link tellign them this is the end of this site and have it link to a hub where you have other niches on etc etc!!!

thank radical
Great advice! :thumbsup

Yes I was thinking galleries are too heavy for freesite.
actually they are tgp galleries that I submitted to other tgps.

gonna remodel gallys and add some txts. :)

Not bad:thumbsup

No probs :thumbsup

Way to copy and paste another webmasters site. Thats word for word an exact copy of another site.
After some searching I found the link.

http://www.thepropc.com/tawny-roberts/index.html

Congrats dude, you can copy and paste.

Yea the site looks good to me.. if i was you i would put alt tags on the images and i would use descriptive text..

looks good tho :thumbsup