Rappers/Freestyle guys.. beat this shit rofl
 

some dude posted this on my site.. thought it was pretty funny

fuckin a slut and i'm about to nut when i just realize that there's poop in my butt. it's pokin out and i start to shout, stomach's makin knots like a damn boy scout. the poo's still flowin and i try to keep goin, but it's pretty hard when your poo spike is showin. gotta think fast so i fuck her in the ass, punch her in the head and the poo comes in mass. i shit on her shit and it smells a bit, but it's better than having your bitch throw a fit. yea donkey punch, for breakfast and lunch, blame the poo on her cause there's a bunch. that's my rhyme and if i had more time, i'd tell you more about the poo that was mine.

Lol... That was just lame... :(

dope :thumbsup

A rap, especially a freestyle, would rarely ever look good in print compared to the actual vocalization of it.