Any hiphop fans here? Wanna give some feedback?
 

My friends song they just finished, #1 is just the intro but i cracked up when i heard it lol

anyhow here they are:


www.jizzbank.com/delete/fcm/1.wma

www.jizzbank.com/delete/fcm/2.wma

what do you think? i like it alot actually, i was surprised when i heard it ...

actually scratch #1, it doesnt have the same affect without leading right into the song lol

so just give feedback on the #2

I like it, despite the claps. Great production value.

What's their name?

FCM

dont think the name is final yet, but it stands for Fuckin Crazy Muzic

Sounds like it was made it someones basement.. If they got some professional studio time they might not be bad.

#2 is good
with some professional help with sound & effects, it could be great record

boy you guys are like hawks heh, ive listend to it several times and never even noticed any sound effects ... im just tone deaf i think ...

#2 is not bad.

the track is pretty catchy, but the clap needs to go.

if they produced this themselves then they did a good job. the song isn't bad, the production is impressive.

good production

I do a bit of work for a record lable and this is the stuff that gets sent in EVERY day ... Sounds pretty much like everything else. They could work on there voice a bit more and switch it up a bit. Lyrics need ALOT of work aswell


just my two cents though

Good flow creative lyrics but they gotta ditch the clapping on the hook. Just dosent fit.


Either go silent there.

or find a new sound.

Otherwise it is a pretty good track.


Pass it on cause if he shops that as a demo it wont get far without a few changes

Good lyrics?

yea shits been loopin... no headache yet




sounds decent for amateur production if that's what it is..




back 2 drinking

To tell the truth i listened to the intro ,first verse, and the hook and it was mostly entertainig but when the hook hit again it got annoying with that clapping shit. so i turned it off. But the intro and the hook lyrics were pretty good i thought.

delivery is weak, mixing/production is shitty, lyrics are just pathetic (comon entertain me), hook is definately trash. I've heard better shit while standing on a corner in new york city. :2 cents:

The clapping on the beat has got to go. It just sounds like the work of an amateur.

The third verse is drowned out compared to the first two verses.

Hook is above average.

Verse 1

Flow is hot
Delivery is hot
Lyrics are ehh

Verse 2

This guy sounds like a mix of Obie and Proof.
Delivery is sick
Flow is hot
Lyrics are nothing new again

Verse 3

Compared to the first two verses, this guy sounds like he got a shot of morphine. He isn't as hype as the first two.

This guy doesn't fit this beat. I'm not feeling him.


I felt #2 on the solo tip the most. Overall it is an above average club track.

Great! Except for the double claps :thumbsup

#2 is not that bad

Is he white?

i dig it yes

#2 is pretty good.

I heard worse.