Please Crit my business card...
 

Had to do it up kinda quickly...

It's for my design so somethign a little less mainstream - anyhow.. Grey or blue? :D

http://kweks.brisurbex.com/mei/uploads/qxcard_copy1.gif

Is that @ ice.org or 1ce.org ?

And can't read the numbers..

Cheers,
Matt

Text way too close to eachother. Very messy.

That should be a poll. :)
Blue looks better for me :2 cents:

Yep thats what I was thinking.

Space it out, make it look less cluttered and also use up the space you have :)

yeah lost a bit in the scaling down from 600 DPI, but i should probably play with the kerning a bit more..

And the text at the back is way too close to the border. Everybody who designs cards should know to leave some space there.

I like the blue better. Like everybody else said, you need to space it out more and maybe use a font that is easier to read.

i cut off the bleed for you guys ;)

Agree with the above about text spacing... blue looks better. :2 cents:

http://kweks.brisurbex.com/mei/uploads/qxcard2.gif

man i hate designing stuff for myself

I like the blue one.
Why is it cool to make your phone numbers so hard to read? It seems like designers always make the important information so small and hard to read fonts.

yeh space the text and the blues are way better... other than that it's great design!

http://kweks.brisurbex.com/mei/uploads/qxcardduck.gif

i'm totally out of fucking ideas lol

The idea with the duck is the best... put your name & phone number in small print on the back. It will sell.

blue looks better. grey looks like you have a b-w laser printer :p

and yep, it way too messy

Ok, here are the clean versions
Mix and match style-

http://quantum-x.ice.org/card/

cheers guys :)

I like the duck the best.