Opinions Please
 

I'm working on an AVS site, and I keep redesigning it, rewriting the text, etc. but I think it's alright now.

Please give me your opinions...

http://www.trailerparklovestories.com/

Thanks!

PSSST: Replace every "trailor" with "trailer".

I cannot read the text under "My Trashy Trailer Sex Updates". It is not only small but the black font color does not help.

At least she sort of look like the princess of the trailer park :winkwink:

Yeah, I keep misspelling it. That's what I get for dropping out of highschool. I've been trying to find a font color that works over the bgcolor without being obnoxious, but it's not going so good.

needs a lot of work... and loads slow.

Like what? I'm not sure what I'm missing...

Well looks good for AVS but you have to loose that SHITTY BROWN! you are not selling a POOP niche!

I thought it looked pretty "trailer park" ... I'll see what else works. Thanks!

I think that it is a nice site. A lot of effort went into it for an avs site as well. Nice work.

Thanks! I'm trying to make it really worth the free membership, and then eventually convert it to a paysite.

Good thinking, good luck with it!

It does. I think it looks really good, it just loads a little slow.

So I definately need to optimize - thanks! It loads pretty fast for me, so I didn't notice it.

Very nice layout, but for a ISDN or Modem User it seems to get loaded pretty slow.
Don't you think it looks to professional for an amateur page?

YES! That's another problem I've been having - for some reason I'm just having a really hard time designing this site. I want it to be amateur...but I want it to look good....I just don't know anymore.