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Critique my gallery

12-07-2003, 11:06 PM

I made a little gallery while I was wasting some time for a little test run on something that I'm working on. I don't know tell me is the load time short, should I remove the table border, I kind of like but I don't know why. I'm a horrible judge of my own stuff so tell me what you think if you would. I haven't set my mind on the text or anything yet, so be as brutal as you like I don't give a fuck.

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12-07-2003, 11:08 PM

You may want to focus more on text.

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12-07-2003, 11:09 PM

Very nice design. I don't think your ctr will be very high though. The color contrast isn't enough on the clickable links and the text on them has to be more definitive such as
--> CLICK HERE MOTHERFUCKER <---

Well, maybe not quite in those words but you get the idea.

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12-07-2003, 11:09 PM

wow - what a great galley. you have real talent.

i would LOVE to post something like that on sleazydream.

if you'd like to get it listed on my site one day please email [email protected]

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12-07-2003, 11:13 PM

Text needs a little work, but otherwise the gallery looks good, I personally also like the table borders so I would say keep them.

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12-07-2003, 11:15 PM

Originally posted by SleazyDream
wow - what a great galley. you have real talent.

i would LOVE to post something like that on sleazydream.

if you'd like to get it listed on my site one day please email [email protected]

You think so?

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12-07-2003, 11:17 PM

i like the gallery. i wonder if she's a good soccer player?

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12-07-2003, 11:18 PM

Originally posted by SleazyDream
wow - what a great galley. you have real talent.

i would LOVE to post something like that on sleazydream.

if you'd like to get it listed on my site one day please email [email protected]

I love it when you do this.

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12-07-2003, 11:20 PM

damn shes got a hot body. i dont think the thumbs are very good and i would lose the background... or lose the invisble table.

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12-07-2003, 11:22 PM

Originally posted by Digipimp

You think so?

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12-07-2003, 11:23 PM

THe big flashing ad text should be linked.

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12-07-2003, 11:31 PM

Thanks for the advice so far everyone, like I said I just threw it together and the text isn't final and neither are the colors, the background may go away for a light color single color, but I was just playing around with the shit. So who knows what might happen and I'll link it all when I use it if i do.

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12-08-2003, 12:28 AM

use close-uped thumbs
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12-08-2003, 12:31 AM

Originally posted by SleazyDream
wow - what a great galley. you have real talent.

i would LOVE to post something like that on sleazydream.

if you'd like to get it listed on my site one day please email [email protected]

I sense a little sarcasm... I didn't think the gallery was that bad. The girl was hot as hell though. If it were my gallery I'd take out the pink, cause I'm sure there would be guys willing to pay to see her pussy for sure.
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12-08-2003, 12:45 AM

Originally posted by xenigo

I sense a little sarcasm... I didn't think the gallery was that bad. The girl was hot as hell though. If it were my gallery I'd take out the pink, cause I'm sure there would be guys willing to pay to see her pussy for sure.

Yeah there was more than a little sarcasm in there that's why I went ahead and emailed him so I can learn the ways of the Oh Great Elite TGP gods. I asked for criticism even brutal if that's his idea of it then great for him.

And yeah I pretty much agree with what you're saying, I am still going to change the exact text wording and quite possibly some of the pics as well. Thanks.

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12-08-2003, 12:46 AM

where do I click to buy?

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12-08-2003, 12:49 AM

Originally posted by Rep
where do I click to buy?

If you want to buy email me at [email protected]

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12-08-2003, 12:53 AM

Should be okay if you took off the flashing wording (center).
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12-08-2003, 12:55 AM

Originally posted by Digipimp

If you want to buy email me at [email protected]

what in the fuck are you talking about?

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12-08-2003, 12:58 AM

Originally posted by Rep

what in the fuck are you talking about?

Just fucking around man that's all, I know what you were saying but if people can fuck with me I can throw it back at them, not intended for you.

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12-08-2003, 01:04 AM

Uh shite that chick is hot!
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12-08-2003, 03:07 AM

The chick is way hot and I am a shitty designer so what do I know..hehe

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12-08-2003, 04:31 AM

Hi Digi.
The gallery looks good to me. However I think you should make better use of where you currently have those hearts. I think some tgp's will consider those blind links and not list you.

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12-08-2003, 04:57 AM

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12-08-2003, 05:02 AM

I think the gallery will get you blacklisted - those linked hearts are not a good idea. Link the flashing text, instead. 2 more thumbs will not crash your server.

The thumbs themselves dont look too hot. Try making them a uniform size for this design. Or, use two sizes - one for vertical, one for horizontal pics. (I'd just crop them to be the same size).

The thumbs are secondary - the main thing to change would be those two hearts.
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12-08-2003, 05:10 AM

Yeah I hear everyone on the hearts, they are going to be graphics with words on them, such as Enter Me or something to that effect you know, otherwise I was not going to link them at all. I hadn't put the links on the gallery and I had removed some, like I said I just threw it together and wanted to see what everyone thought before I used it.

Oh yeah another thing, the gallery isn't going to be used on a TGP as everyone assumes. Thanks for the advice everyone so far.

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12-08-2003, 05:36 AM

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12-08-2003, 05:53 AM

Looks nice. I like this type of gallery layout. I think I would change the purple text with pink outline to look more like the enter me sign at the bottom of the page,to give it a better contrast with the background. The enter me text would have to be changed, but I'm not sure of the colors (it has to stand out). That's my but I'm probably wrong

By the way, the chick is hot!

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12-08-2003, 05:57 AM

Where is the creativity and I don't mean graphics. Graphics are overrated. I am referring to text, ie; sales text.

Who is she other than a girl named Michelle on a cam? What does she do other than her boyfriend taking pictures of her at college?

What is she going to be doing in the future? Does she have any friends that participate on cams?

Are there any personal videos? Does she reply personally by email?

Can she share any personal stories of her one night fucks maybe with the college football team or the head cheerleader on the cheer squad.

Does she suck dick on her cam site or eat pussy. Who the hell is this Michelle girl.

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