| Hindsight |
11-28-2003 01:41 PM |
Dude, i wouldnt worry about all the hatin you're gonna get here. I think I know what I'm talkin' about and I'd say you got some nice skillz there. At a guess I'd say this is your first audio and you've been spending more time writing. Your lyrics are quite slick, good use of multies for sure, but if you're gonna go with this style you need to aim for more funny shit..
My suggestion would be to drop the pen and paper for 3 months and go hit up some clubs on open mic, get used to freestyle battling and work hard on ur delivery - which to be blunt currently fucking sucks - try spitting whilst high , it'll help you come with a more 'i dont gve a fuck' vibe. You need a fuckload more enthusiasm and I think it sounds like you need to learn your lyrics better.. it sounds like you're straining to spit them properly, too much concentration. Just go over and over and over it again, learning when to breathe, when to use 'rubber bouncy lips' and when to come from further back your throat.
I also think the beat sucks for your rhyme, it's way too Slim Shady of 3 years ago.. stop being a wannabe and work on your own style.
You def got writing skillz, just put a fuckload of effort into yor delievery. Freestyle battlin will really elevate ur aggression.
Keep goin' though dude, it's about wanting it bad enough.
:2 cents:
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