My 1st logo critique please

**Stud Money** · 10-23-2003, 07:29 PM

Originally posted by pink_in_the_middle
This is my 1st ever logo. Nothing too fancy I know...be nice :D

Its nice and clean thats for sure

**freeadultcontent** · 10-23-2003, 07:30 PM

The orange on black stands out, the glasses are just to cute, but I think you stole it. So defend yourself. ohhh now the image loads.
nevermind.

**pink_in_the_middle** · 10-23-2003, 07:30 PM

Originally posted by Stud Money

Its nice and clean thats for sure

LOL I was so excited I forgot to add it

**freeadultcontent** · 10-23-2003, 07:31 PM

umm pie isnt really centered, and umm well I do not get it.

**pink_in_the_middle** · 10-23-2003, 07:36 PM

Originally posted by freeadultcontent
umm pie isnt really centered, and umm well I do not get it.

Better? It's a bit hard to get both words to look right considering one word is longer.

**pink_in_the_middle** · 10-23-2003, 07:40 PM

Oh common ppl this if GFY ...wheres all the bashing? lol

**FreeHugeMovies** · 10-23-2003, 07:40 PM

PINKY POO!!!!!!!!

**Stud Money** · 10-23-2003, 07:41 PM

Make the pie form the letter 'O' in 'post'

**FreeHugeMovies** · 10-23-2003, 07:41 PM

Originally posted by Stud Money
Make the pie form the letter 'O' in 'post'

What he said

**pink_in_the_middle** · 10-23-2003, 07:42 PM

Originally posted by Stud Money
Make the pie form the letter 'O' in 'post'

I dunnooooooooo... what do you think FreeHugeMovies?

**Abyss_Vee** · 10-23-2003, 07:42 PM

Originally posted by freeadultcontent
The orange on black stands out, the glasses are just to cute, but I think you stole it. So defend yourself. ohhh now the image loads.
nevermind.

**pink_in_the_middle** · 10-23-2003, 07:42 PM

Originally posted by FreeHugeMovies

What he said

LOL okay... just give me a sec

**wargames** · 10-23-2003, 07:42 PM

cool banner

**liquidmoe** · 10-23-2003, 07:43 PM

Choose a font thats a bit looser, not so hard on the lines, then it blends more with the idea of a pie being nice and soft, I think you can find a better font. Otherwise its pretty good imo.

**freeadultcontent** · 10-23-2003, 07:44 PM

I dont want to get hungry when I am horny. I only have 4 brain cells working when I am in search of spanking material, and if I see that logo there is a good chance my reptilian brain will make me look in the fridge.

**brand0n** · 10-23-2003, 07:44 PM

nice and neat but plain

**pink_in_the_middle** · 10-23-2003, 07:45 PM

?

**MetaMan** · 10-23-2003, 07:45 PM

u need font work the bevel is burning my eyes AHHHHHH!

**username** · 10-23-2003, 07:59 PM

Originally posted by pink_in_the_middle

?

ok well the pie replacing the "o" was another step towards making it better. The fonts you used could definately be improved. Try tinkering with the transparency, opacity, or blur of objects that would probably make it better aswell. Right now it just looks boring (not to be mean), spice it up.

have fun, peace.

**EZRhino** · 10-23-2003, 08:09 PM

Clean, if you did that in less then half hour its good, if not. Practice makes perfect.

**TheViper** · 10-23-2003, 09:51 PM

get that pancake out and eat it.

I don't like it at all, but that is just my opinion

**MetaformX** · 10-23-2003, 09:55 PM

it's not bad...but it's not good either

My 1st logo critique please