Is this any good?
 

I promote clubseventeen but their tour isn't that good..... the members area rocks though. I am designing my own tour and have two pages ready so far. Please take a peak and tell me if it is better or worse.
Their tour: http://www.clubseventeen.com
My tour: http://www.adult-cinemas.com/testtour/index.html (press the link take free tour, i have one page of the tour ready)
I'm pretty new to designing so i don't know if this is any good though.
Advice me please and don't spare me :)

I like your tour however it's very amateur. On a scale of one to ten I'd give it a 4. I like some aspects but in my opinion the second page is too cluttered to the left. It doesnt "go" anywhere such as follow a pattern. It doesnt do anything for my eyes.

I'm sorry, i'm from Belgium... what does "cluttered" mean?

To much data squashed into a small space, Try to spread it out a bit more )(= Cluttered =)(