I need a critique of my site
 

Eve's Chubbylist

Whatcha people think?

<H1>ITS SHIT</H1>

<h1>FUCKTARD</h1>

Hi Eve,

Looks good please ICQ me 52416841 want to talking about advertising.

Thanks

*yawn*....stretch..slap

:321GFY

none of the pics load.

Dayum, cellulite city

They're too heavy

Those bitches are FAT..

I would fuck this one:
http://www.bigsexlovers.com/hosted/g...rset/thumb.jpg
link

Well...it is Eve's CHUBBYLIST :Graucho

Heh..mebbe I should have put up a warning..

The list of paysites that scroll as you move down the page is annoying first. But it's also a really bad color to use to get surfers to click there because the text just blends into the background. You might have more luck if you 1) change the text color and 2)just put them at one set place on the page and intersperse some other more attention-grabbing banners into the middle of the page.

The surfer isn't really looking to the far left of your page. So it just becomes some irratating thing that makes them want to leave your page.

Thanks for the info...I dumped the scrolly menu thing...going to load up the links at the bottom of each category...any other suggestions?
I want this to look somewhat unique...all my other sites are probably going to be modeled after this one