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TheFLY 03-17-2003 12:22 AM

Have you ever written a love poem for someone? What happened?
 
One girl inspired me to write a "love" poem 2 or 3 years back... anyway I don't want to degrade the poem by posting in here on GFY (hope you understand), but the point is I wrote it the first night that I talked to her -- and saved it (or memorized it -- not sure) -- maybe a month later we hooked up (she was out of town before that) -- and she loved the poem so much that she had it displayed on her wall and would always ask me to read it to her... Needless to say I was really happy that I wrote it... I think there's a certain honesty about a good poem...

Tonight I was inspired again... I did have a bloody mary, a pint of bud, some coffee and the raindrops to help it along, but I think I have a real masterpiece... the words really express the mysterious attraction I have for this girl... I'm excited to give it to her... we'll see if there is a happy ending... :thumbsup

nofx 03-17-2003 12:23 AM

i write poems for my gf sometimes, she likes it when i do. they always make bad situations get better :thumbsup

Rictor 03-17-2003 12:23 AM

Always has the same result...nookie...try it.

TheFLY 03-17-2003 12:30 AM

Never again
will you feel this way
my words are sex
my concepts are sway.

Gman.357 03-17-2003 12:31 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by TheFLY
Never again
will you feel this way
my words are sex
my concepts are sway.

You give her that, and you are definitely not getting laid.

:winkwink:

TheFLY 03-17-2003 12:32 AM

now i'm about as sad as an ice cube
sitting in your drink
missing melting on you

:Graucho

TheFLY 03-17-2003 12:34 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Gman.357


You give her that, and you are definitely not getting laid.

:winkwink:

Yeah these are my GFY caliber poems... nothing too thought provoking :)

---

Feel my twisting strain,
my forceful thrust,
my vulgar vein.
Let me fuck you every hour.
Throw away your clock.
Set your pace and keep in time,
with the rise and fall of cock.

Smut 03-17-2003 12:34 AM

Beatnik poems rule! :Graucho

Gman.357 03-17-2003 12:34 AM

Try this one...

You coldhearted witch
You insensitive bitch
You spent all my cash
Now I live in a ditch.

That should warm her panties.

:glugglug

Jak 03-17-2003 01:16 AM

Fuck you, that's what I said,
you freakin bitch, you whore,
God damn it.
Wanted to enjoy my drink,
but now I gotta
slam it.
You hit me with that shit
you hit me on and on
again,
I should have seen it coming
when you came (did you?)
and when,
You had that shit annoying grin
I hate so
on your lips,
and your left hand perched that way
(you know the way, yeah)
on your hips,
and your eyebrow cocked up cocky
like a bridge
over the water,
(by the way you guys I wish I hadn't waited,
should have shot her)
So you're lying there with me
and start this crap about
your feelings,
What the fuck bitch why not crawl
right under my skin like it's
peeling?
Can't we just enjoy the afterglow with
smokes and this here drink,
instead of talking lovey dovey,
Jesus Christ, I can't even think.
I'll tell you what, I'll marry you
Yeah, sure, if I'm ever able.
In the mean time bitch get out the bed,
your money's on the table.

andi_germany 03-17-2003 02:27 AM

Nothing more romantic than a nice love poem nowadays where close to noone writes them anylonger.

xerox 03-17-2003 02:31 AM

I wrote one to my ex and the bitch showed all her friends and they thought i wa corny as fuck. never will do that again

x3guide 03-17-2003 06:09 AM

http://www.hypercom.ca/love/

netstarz 03-17-2003 06:17 AM

No poems but songs yeah. One good corny assed song can do the job. The cool part is you don't even have to mean it and you can use it again later on someone else.

Gutterboy 03-17-2003 06:25 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by xerox
I wrote one to my ex and the bitch showed all her friends and they thought i wa corny as fuck. never will do that again
:1orglaugh

Exactly the reason I've never done it.

12clicks 03-17-2003 06:39 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by TheFLY
Have you ever written a love poem for someone? What happened?


No but my friend did. We called him gay.:1orglaugh

dantheman 03-17-2003 07:22 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by 12clicks


No but my friend did. We called him gay.:1orglaugh

12clicks dont post mojo's poem again :1orglaugh

Monique Niccole 03-17-2003 07:24 AM

I don't write love poems. I write hate poems.

Naughty 03-17-2003 07:25 AM

tried it, she called me a fag, kicked me in the nuts and broke up

Jamdin 03-17-2003 07:39 AM

First love poem I wrote was for a member of the opposite sex that got me a trip to the principal office for harassment. But did that stop me...NO! However, most of my "love" poems are now mostly about broken love or such stuff. I haven't wrote a pure love poem since high school since I haven't felt real love since then.

I do write a lot of sex poems too ;)

TheFLY 03-17-2003 09:13 AM

Would I ever write a corny love poem? maybe for a corny girl... but I don't fall for those hahahahas... :Graucho ...this poem isn't about love in a direct sense -- it involves indirect references and imagery, and delicious sopping-wet words... that only she could decifer given the context... it basically explains my obsession with her in a very clever, innocent and pimpin' way :glugglug


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