my new site reviews plz
 

well after being here some time, i decided to make a site where you can auction your xxx stuff sites,domains,movies,pictures.... it's 100% free, i just want to have a site where you acc can sell xxx related stuff under control, not many sites allow xxx content when you wanna put it on auction, hope to get some posetiv respons on it, and feel free to start using it...

url
sellyourxxxsite.com

where is that background image from?

Also it is very slow loading

i did some googleling and find a couple of images, and put them together

Well..

1. I can't believe that you actually have your own site listed in the auction. Doesn't do much for the longevity does it?
2. It's got many, many, many grammatical and spelling errors.
3. You don't seem to have any title, description or keywords
4. You are using an old version of WP auctions (3.5.2). The current version is 4.4.4.1. Did you get it off a torrent?
5. The overall look looks dated

Anyway, good luck.

its a Brazzers image btw

no i acc did buy the wp auction plugin, and yes i need to correct spelling erros, i will get right on it....

Well you would do well to update it to the current version otherwise you are likely to get hacked. That's what updates are for.

okey i was under the imppresion that it was the newest since i allmost did purchase it...

Wordpress is free

He is talking about the wordpress auctions plugin

Correcting spelling errors is very 'IMPORTENT !!!!'

Well, I think it's important if you are releasing a new site and announcing it to a community to be professional.
If it was me I would check and double check every page to ensure there were no (or as few as possible) errors.

Of course, if your first language isn't English then of course exceptions can be made but spelling wasn't my only point.

im not that good in english, maybe i should hireone to check up on it...
and i did put my own site there as a test auction, its removed i see the point in that :)

can someone check for spelling errors now thx :)

As a sign of goodwill on behalf of everyone else who's facepalmed at you thinking it was a good idea to do it yourself, I'll update your contact page as well as some small edits and grammar for free.

Send your login details to my sig email.

thx mate, really nice of you :)

Make sure you fix these.

Not bad though, I suppose. Constantly keep tweaking and improving.

What I've done:

1. Changed "terms of service" to "How it Works" in order to better qualify the content and consolidate the process behind bidding and what you expect from everyone. Completely rewrote the article using correct spelling and grammar.

2. Rearranged navigation order to better fit logical click processes (From Home > How it Works > Register), before you had them mixed up in different locations. Make it obvious to the user how they go about getting to where you want them to go.

3. Installed Yoast Plugin for SEO

4. Updated your global title tag format

5. Gave your homepage a meta description

That's a step in the right direction. The rest you're going to have to learn yourself and work on. One thing I would really suggest is getting rid of that pixelated background, my eyes actually hurt from looking at it so much.

cool thanx alot man, i owe you a bear, or you can borrow my wife for a night, and ill make the movie :) then we have at least one real auction on the site :)

jay

if anyone have any suggstions to what to be changed, and they can do it, i will gladly hire you to tweak uo the site, and make it even better, and i will pay for it offcourse

jay

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*lol* iment beer :) good one

Your site does not work.

Why can I login and change all of the auctions. Surely I shouldn't be able to make changes that someone else has posted?

Also, when I login I see another users (your) paypal and email address!!!

Also, if I purchase something I don't get an email to tell me I won.

Back to the drawing board I think http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/4030/yr9z.png

Partner looked at my weirdly when I started laughing hysterically at a picture of a bear.

Thanks for that.

okey ill have a look at those issues thanx for pointing out

just keep working on it

Good luck with it jaymandk ;)

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okey first problem solved login/logout solved and design changed so it now ill think dont look so dated ??? response on that plz :)
i now need to take care of the secrity issues, then it should be done :)

http://24.media.tumblr.com/6946d9dc7...13pro1_500.jpg

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okey we did rewrite the complete engine, and will add new design, so it should be ready during one week, i hope to get some support to the new site, when it finaly up and running, so we can sell some site,domains there :)