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Hi everyone lorsha here from lorshasworld.com :)

My hubby has changed our main page, and I would appreciate any feedback that any of you have.

http://www.lorshasworld.com/main.htm

Thanks so much!

Lorsha

I'm a fan of the amateur facial niche....

but one thing I remember that is not on this version, is the image where you have some 'rope' laid down streaking across and into your hair, that was a real 'dirty dirty' pic....

I'd add that back somewhere, other than that you got that 'amateur' facial site going on...


should work just fine I'd imagine...

Thanks Jimmy, but I don't know what pic you mean! :)

Could you maybe try to explain that one better. I don't have any with any kind of rope in my hair, hehe!

Lorsha

I remember the pic Jimmy :)

Anyhow...I'm on my Powerbook at the momnet, and the page doesn't look so hot. Some of the text from some table rows are being displayed in (overtop of) other table rows. Just a big jumbled mess.

I like where you're going with it, just take a look at what I said...

I'm using IE 5.1 for Mac OS9

WAY TOO MANY EXITS....

Aside from that, in terms of design, it's a little to sterile looking, which isn't a horrible thing. It looks amateur (and authentic) as it should, and I wouldn't say the niche is at all oversaturated yet (no pun intended). Personally, I'd probably go with a warmer feel, yet maintaining that "amateur/reality" look.

Thanks Jimmy, but I don't know what pic you mean! :)

Could you maybe try to explain that one better. I don't have any with any kind of rope in my hair, hehe!

Lorsha

Candy, unfortunately we use a program called IBM homepage builder. It is for html dummies like my hubby and I, hehe.

You need to be on standard "medium" font, and the text will be fine. :)

Lorsha

Jeremy what do you mean by exits? Are you referring to my site navigation links on the bottom right? Or the exit pages on my tour?

Thanks!

Lorsha

lol you NAUGHTY NAUGHTY girl....


ditto to what SFJ said, warm it up a bit, and keep the reality/amateur feel....

The exit consoles. I think I got like 4 or 5 pop-ups when I left your site.

In my opinion it looks alot like cumswallowwife.com

:2 cents:

Yes, they are very similar! I wonder who copied who? :1orglaugh

How do I warm it up Jimmy?

And Jeremy, that is because a couple of those sites, pop when you leave them. They are not my popups. I get no credit for them on the toplists. I will have my hubby look into that?

Lorsha

So who copied who? :Graucho

Hmm.... I do see some resemblance with cumswallowwife.com, but not that much.

Jimmy, do you mean this pic?
http://images.andale.com/f2/115/106/...6559_ppp43.jpg

Lorsha

Hmmm.. yeah, I wonder who copied who? Lorsha, I'm pretty disappointed to see that. Especially since we offered to help you promote your site... hmm let's see, you don't want us to successfully promote your site like we did Amber's site, but you'll try to copy our success by stealing the design. Nice, classy move.

Lovely.

with this niche I've found that 'the messier' the face the better :)

and that was a pretty messy shot hehe

welcome to the amateur niche... it's standard practice

Whoa catalina COPIED the design??

Short of using a FONT that I liked on cumswallowwife.com, in what way did I COPY it????

Gimme a break............

Lorsha

I do not copy.

Does anyone else honestly think that I "copied" their design?

Please let me know. I honestly don't get it.

Lorsha

preach on brother easton, hahaha. :1orglaugh

Your staggering intelligence continues to amaze me...

carry on with your bad self.. you go girl! I'll take the high road on this one, since I don't have anything to prove :thumbsup

This is INCREDBILY insulting!

http://www.lorshasworld.com/mainpurple.htm is a page that we have had up, LONG before cumswallowwife.com was ever born.

Maybe I should be accusing you of stealing my design??? Do you not see how silly this is?

Lorsha

Can someone tell me, why it says "I scan my content from penthouse", under my name?

Lorsha

This only shows that the elements in question were not on your site before. Thanks.

"New owner of GFY" ?

Okay....now I'm REALLY confused!

Lorsha

You can't set your title until after 1000 posts.

I will try keep this thread going for you so you can closer reach that milestone. :thumbsup

Elements in question? A FU***NG Font? Geezus......my hubby can't use the same FONT as another site??? Gimme a freaking break. This is REALLY getting out of hand......

........Oh yeah.......I'm going to have my husband COPY A SITE, then go ADVERTISE it on the biggest freaking adult forum on the internet. Sure.........

Lorsha

try eating more cum :thumbsup

No matter what happened, I think you would stand to lose more by copying someone elses work.
It doesn't seem too many people start websites from scratch anymore.

no, it's not just a font. Do I really need to take screen caps and circle things??

hahaha, you obviously haven't seen my wreck of an amateur site. :winkwink:

URL please? i'll show you mine if you show me yours!

Well let's just say you wouldn't be the first to do something like that LOL!

Oh Turbo GIVE ME A BREAK.

I said in the beginning of this thread, that I do see some similarities. NOT DENYING IT! NOT DENYING IT! Can you read that????? Just in case you can't........ NOT DENYING IT!

But copying it??? Please..........

Lorsha

Hey, is that your pussy in the pics? :Graucho

www.AmbersAmateurHardcore.com (has an exit pop)

tag, you're it!

which pics? :winkwink:

thanks for the pop-up warning... it was pretty painless

looks cool, btw very nice boobs :thumbsup

This is what I see on my 1024 x 768 settings.

http://www.porngo.com/ifb/lorsha.jpg

Lorsha looks alot like the exwife of a good friend of mine. Creepy.

Lorsha, hit me up on Q and let me see if I can help you with some of your design troubles. In certain resolutions, your text overlaps and looks bad. :(

Or I can point you in the direction of a couple of really good designers...:)

on your WWW on your post it goes to crazynakedchick.com
But, I see your site. Is that REALLY you??

hehe, thanks. :)

checking yours out now....slinkylinks i presume?

This thread rules.

Cum Swallow Wife Fa Life yo.

the two pics at the top? yea that's me. those specific pics are from 4 weeks ago, a live camshow i did for my am site.

Thanks so much Vox, and tala. :)

Unfortunately that is how our IBM homepage builder works. It builds the HTML for us, and it only works on "medium" font.

Fortunately that is the deault setting for I.E, so we don't have too many complaints about it.

Lorsha

By the way, if you would like info on my creamydollars partner program, just shoot me an email. We are presently getting 30+ new signups per day. :thumbsup

Lorsha

correct... it's part TG and part collection of recent girls i've done stuff to, all in the name of content...

you can also see my stunt cock work here:
www.herfirstgangbang.com
www.blowjobauditions.com
www.gotjizz.com
www.wefuckinpublic.com
www.videovirgin.com

etc... (don't blame me for the pop-ups on all those) :1orglaugh