my very first flash banner - rate it :)
 

Hi guys and dolls :)


I've just started using Flash today, and lookie what I have made:

http://www.1stcontent.com/gfx/banner.html



How is it?

Looks great. Just slow it down a little.:thumbsup

I like it!

:thumbsup

It's fine, just slow it down some. A bit too jerky right now...

:thumbsup slow it down, I almost had a seizure lol

I would change that intro..hard to read but not bad at all :thumbsup

decent for your first one

The intro sucks, the rest is :thumbsup though.
ZoiNk

Hey again :)

Thanks for your comments on my first flash project everybody! Going to change the intro and show it down a bit :)

pretty good

It's pretty good. My only observations:

1) Slow it down
2) The 1st Content logo is too small/illegible compared to the rest of the design. It almost seems like an afterthought.

Overall though, great job!

the chick on the 1st Content logo looks like a midget..

I think it is really awesome....If that is your first then I am looking forward to seeing your hundredth!!!

I think it's amazing for your first attempt!

Only thing I would say is that it needs slowing down.

you need to place more emphasis on your brand name

it isnt clear enough in the add

What you are trying to do is .....

1st Content = The only name you need in content (or somehting like that)

Brand Recognition is what banners are for

Brand Recognition
Brand Recognition
Brand Recognition
Brand Recognition
Brand Recognition
Brand Recognition

Speaking of which - My brand is www.HardProfits.com - The name you need for an honest sponsor :Graucho

Also - slow the ad down

Daniel

Not bad, man! :)

Yes, its fairly good...

I like it. You've inspired me to try flash again. :)

Nice work:)