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Machete_ 04-01-2011 12:57 PM

Gentlemen, i would like your opinion on my Haiku:
 
Beautiful day outside
And I am stuck inside
Safe from the radiation.


well ?

bronco67 04-01-2011 01:01 PM

I'll grade yours by writing my own....

It's five syllables
Then seven then five again
You fucking dumb ass

_Richard_ 04-01-2011 01:01 PM

your verses lack sound
logic fails to meet the goal
better luck next time

Machete_ 04-01-2011 01:03 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by bronco67 (Post 18023046)
I'll grade yours by writing my own....

It's five syllables
Then seven then five again
You fucking dumb ass

http://www.gfy.com/images/icons/frown2.gif

Tom_PM 04-01-2011 01:08 PM

Use of three lines of up to 17 syllables;
Use of a season word (kigo);
Use of a cut or kire (sometimes indicated by a punctuation mark) to compare two images implicitly.

Winters hold breaking
Colds touch passed; spring's fresh new birth
now go fuck yourself

_Richard_ 04-01-2011 01:09 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by bronco67 (Post 18023046)
I'll grade yours by writing my own....

It's five syllables
Then seven then five again
You fucking dumb ass

damn. :1orglaugh

bronco67 04-01-2011 01:15 PM

Ruiner of threads
Posting stupid long pictures
Digital cockblock

Machete_ 04-01-2011 01:19 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by bronco67 (Post 18023163)
Ruiner of threads
Posting stupid long pictures
Digital cockblock

I like your style. Can you compose one about sissy crybabies adding users to ignore-list?

Nikki_Licks 04-01-2011 01:25 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by bronco67 (Post 18023046)
I'll grade yours by writing my own....

It's five syllables
Then seven then five again
You fucking dumb ass

Oh shit! :1orglaugh:1orglaugh

bushwacker 04-01-2011 02:06 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by bronco67 (Post 18023046)
I'll grade yours by writing my own....

It's five syllables
Then seven then five again
You fucking dumb ass

Best post of the year! :1orglaugh:1orglaugh

ruff 04-01-2011 02:57 PM

Who's Japanese here? Anyone?

HomerSimpson 04-01-2011 04:01 PM

buy these pills and you're free to go outside :thumbsup

bronco67 04-01-2011 04:11 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Machete_ (Post 18023204)
I like your style. Can you compose one about sissy crybabies adding users to ignore-list?

I don't ignore anyone, no matter how annoying they are. It's all part of the entertainment.

Chosen 04-01-2011 11:32 PM

LoL :1orglaugh

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