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Gentlemen, i would like your opinion on my Haiku:
Beautiful day outside
And I am stuck inside Safe from the radiation. well ? |
I'll grade yours by writing my own....
It's five syllables Then seven then five again You fucking dumb ass |
your verses lack sound
logic fails to meet the goal better luck next time |
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Use of three lines of up to 17 syllables;
Use of a season word (kigo); Use of a cut or kire (sometimes indicated by a punctuation mark) to compare two images implicitly. Winters hold breaking Colds touch passed; spring's fresh new birth now go fuck yourself |
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Ruiner of threads
Posting stupid long pictures Digital cockblock |
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Who's Japanese here? Anyone?
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LoL :1orglaugh
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Fucking is awesome
I love tight wet pussy Damn she so horny |
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