HELP!!! Please critique my XXX Cartoons
 

Im not sure if most sites want strictly ANIME/HENTAI style art or a combo of "American" realistic type cartoons with hints of Anime/Hentai. Here's some of my artwork.


Feedback would be greatly appreciated!!!

http://www.piczonline.com/client/mitzi1/SAMPLE_1.jpg


Here's another sample

http://www.piczonline.com/client/mitzi1/SAMPLE_2.jpg


Im thinking of selling EXCLUSIVE custom made cartoons for $1 a panel, Let me know what you guys think.

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toons are a little weird for me but those are pretty kewl:thumbsup

Great stuff! I wish I had some huge versions so I could try my hand at coloring them :)

Thanks Tootie. How about a swap, I give you exclusive toons, you build a BYOT I can use based on some of my other toons?

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good job :thumbsup

http://www.extremedaily.com/link/color01.jpg

Real quickie color job. It could have looked much better with the original scan and if I'd spent more than a few minutes. But it was fun. :)

E-mail me at eightiesgirl =at= comcast dot net if you wanna talk about maybe arranging something. :)

Tootie, GREAT coloring work! What did you use? Photoshop? or hand colored?

bumpy

Photoshop :)

really good, congratulations, pls email me some of your works

emin at sextronix.com

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I like them a lot better than some of the other toons I've seen here on the board.

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thanks, man.

Would a site based on this type of art do just as well or better than Hentai/Anime?

bumperooski

bumpin for critiques/tips

wow, cool stuff!:thumbsup

Those are awesome :) How can you afford to consider $1 a panel for exclusive...?

this quality - yes

very good works

now as you want to start selling them for a buck
i'll buy out everything that you produce for $3 per panel
must be the same style and quality as color01.jpg
and cleaned up

mark at rc-cash.com
this is a serious offer

Drawing and animation is my passion so the price is fine by me. I also enjoy bringing to reality client's cartoon ideas.

Thanks, Tex. Is black and white okay or full color or maybe "wash color"?

I can produce about 50 a week. Also send me your ideas for panels so I can produce them custom exclusive for you.

colored like color01.jpg just get rid off the grey lines and min height/width must be 600 pixels when shrinked down

send me email

i have scripts ready, we can start with pinups and/or short comics

Nice work! Don't sell yourself cheap!!!

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Tex,

Sounds great! I'm interested in producing pin up/hardcore panels and maybe later comixxx once you have ideas re characters/storyline, etc.


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1$ for exclusive? That's ridiculous! You'd make more money opening your own AVS or pay site.

Grab a chronometer and time yourself next time you do a pic and then calculate your hourly rate. I know some real quick artists who could do that sort of art in 15 minutes, but even then (Which is REAL quick) you're talking about 4$ per hour. McDonalds pays better, I think.

those are radddd man, i hate most peoples crappy design work, or drawing work. but that is some nice ass sheeet.

nice stuff! looks very nice

Make sets and sell them yourself.

You could also broker them at places like fetishbrokers.com

nice!

How do brokerage partnerships work? what is the % of the broker?

Hmmm interesting points. But I draw very quickly and I draw for fun. Good points you made though.

by the way, thanks for all the great feedback so far.

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His work deserves to be seen more :)

Thanks, Tootie!

very nice work!
how much would you charge for a logo? (cartoon character only)

I mostly do only panels and comixxx.

That's pretty good work. I hope you erase the pencil in the finals. Do more and start your own AVS and then member site. You will need to produce quite a bit more though.

nice!
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