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  • StinkyPink
    It's all goooood.
    • Aug 2009
    • 1591

    #1

    Eminem ain't got shit on me...

    My take on this business.

    My deliverance sentences all of you with no resistance
    Gettin lifted from the prescence of my lyrical existence
    Livin' in a twisted image, sleepin deep within your vision
    Situations gettin' thin and this is just the begining.
    So sit back and pay attention to this lesson I'm presentin'
    Let your mind attract the facts and react with pro precision
    What you need to do is listen, picture me in my position
    Get your differences fixed, quit contradicting your decisions.

    A proposition fo' niggas that's sellin' bitches fo' figgas
    If it's the only way to get it, and you want it, go get it
    As a witness to po' pimpin', gettin' womens a business
    And all the bitches in the shit is in top physical fitness
    The shit is wild nigga, so take this shit in progression
    Go get some fits that fit these bitches that be in your possession
    Don't be stressin' on this lesson, get your hoes to invest in
    Some clothes for hoes that only go with a selective collection

    Contemplate on gettin' paper, cause theres paper to get and
    Playa hatas hatin' playas and the pussy they pimpin'
    This shit is gettin' kind of sick, and I ain't takin it pimp
    The only hoes I grow to know are those with money to spend
    So if you want in, get in, we'll split the dividends
    If it ever comes to an end I'll leave no evidence
    Remember it's the money, my honeys, that's what I represent
    I put you up on game trick ass niggas but your hesitant

    Fuck it...
  • DamianJ
    Too lazy to set a custom title
    • Jul 2006
    • 15808

    #2
    4 bar pass:

    Yo, yo, you call me a nigga and say you is hesitant?
    Shit, you ain't bigger, we don't need no fucking measurement
    All your bitch/money/shit/ triggers something big in me - an elephant
    I'd slap yo' with my trunk, wigger, but i ain't that fucking arrogant

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    • StinkyPink
      It's all goooood.
      • Aug 2009
      • 1591

      #3
      Haha, not bad. Maybe we can get some battles going on in here?

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      • Farang
        one sick puppy
        • Oct 2004
        • 11713

        #4
        fbm

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        • StinkyPink
          It's all goooood.
          • Aug 2009
          • 1591

          #5
          Eh... Typical Eminem. Pretty good song though.

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          • Zuzana Designs
            All Your Design Needs
            • Feb 2005
            • 20896

            #6
            I have been writing a rap song for a couple months now about this business and the haters. It needs a bit more work but when I get time to finish it I will post it up. I have 3 versus done and the hook. Just need to finish it all up and make it a hit.

            Verse #1

            Here is my story, It’s a fearful journey through out the last 10 years. That’s a decade for the cheerful circus clowns slow at switching gears. I Started out in porn a poor pretty cam model with lots of fears. I was shy I was broke I didn’t give a fuck. I shredded some tears along the way but I never gave up. I did what I did just to make a buck. Not a deer but some dollars is what I’m getting at. This rap is fast don’t let it hold you down, it has multiple meanings, so just sit right back. Don’t Buckle, your seat belt on this ride cause it’s going fast, it’s a story of myself, my bizz, my life my cash and all the mischievous folks. Try and keep up while I spit at you, this is no joke. Some call me wonder women while I’m in demand, I’m like Lebron, D-Wade and Bosh with a master plan. I speak my mind all the time cause I know I can. While your scamming customers I’m out on my island beach working on my tan. Weak ass companies listen to this advice as it’s free. You will hear it on the radio on the boards like gfy and on TV. I will end verse 1 with this simple line. Stop the scamming the carding and adult from dying.

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            • chronig
              Registered User
              • Oct 2009
              • 2653

              #7
              what the fucking hell is going on in here ... ...

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              • StinkyPink
                It's all goooood.
                • Aug 2009
                • 1591

                #8
                Pretty cool Zuzana. I like the ending of the verse.

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                • 2intense
                  Too lazy to set a custom title
                  • Dec 2009
                  • 12494

                  #9
                  Originally posted by chronig
                  what the fucking hell is going on in here ... ...
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                  • Zuzana Designs
                    All Your Design Needs
                    • Feb 2005
                    • 20896

                    #10
                    Originally posted by StinkyPink
                    Pretty cool Zuzana. I like the ending of the verse.
                    Thanks

                    Verse #2

                    This is my business stop the hating and the selfish acts. Stop running your mouth off at the lips until you know the facts. You run your mouth like a faucet, your running out of water, I?ll turn this fucking place into a desert in short order. You?re not a client, customer, or someone that I care about, but just some basement kid, that wishes he had the dedication, drive, devotion and dollars that I did. You try and talk down to me and act like you?re mister macho man, but in the end I?m the hot ass chick with all the cash in my hand. You fucking weirdo?s should send me all your hard earned dough. Oh wait a minute you don?t have any bread cause you got to know, you ate it all up, your super fat and stupid lazy can?t get off the couch?.. Ouch did I just say that? I?m a super Bitch in love with the dick. Sometimes I rhyme slow sometime I rhyme quick. I burned my cake building my design empire, so at 35 I can sit back and fucking retire. I will end verse 2 with another well known fact, it?s not the tubes that destroyed adult we all know that. It?s the evil trolls that never got a fucking degree, that?s why they have no idea how to run a bizz with honesty. Here we go to the hook it?s phenomenal. Listen to the words they are golden and hysterical.

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                    • StinkyPink
                      It's all goooood.
                      • Aug 2009
                      • 1591

                      #11
                      Haha, that's great!

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                      • DamianJ
                        Too lazy to set a custom title
                        • Jul 2006
                        • 15808

                        #12
                        Old skool! Just rhyming the last word! Brilliantly retro!

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                        • Zuzana Designs
                          All Your Design Needs
                          • Feb 2005
                          • 20896

                          #13
                          Originally posted by StinkyPink
                          Haha, that's great!
                          Thanks. I will be singing the hook when it gets recorded. It's going to be fun

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                          • Coup
                            🚨 PBBC International 🚨
                            • Apr 2010
                            • 9931

                            #14
                            feminist women love eminem.
                            slim shady? I'm sick of him

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                            • comeplay
                              Confirmed User
                              • Nov 2004
                              • 1435

                              #15
                              You can't touch eminem, you ain't got shit on him
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                              • Jon Oso
                                Confirmed User
                                • Feb 2005
                                • 2241

                                #16
                                :walks on stage:
                                :looks around:
                                "Fuck you, bitches."
                                : Drops mic and walks out:

                                /thread.
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                                • Litzer
                                  Confirmed User
                                  • Sep 2008
                                  • 480

                                  #17
                                  Originally posted by Zuzana Designs
                                  Thanks. I will be singing the hook when it gets recorded. It's going to be fun
                                  When are you recording?! Hope its soon I would love to hear this.

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                                  • Zuzana Designs
                                    All Your Design Needs
                                    • Feb 2005
                                    • 20896

                                    #18
                                    Originally posted by Litzer
                                    When are you recording?! Hope its soon I would love to hear this.
                                    I'm not sure. I have to find time to get to a studio and still looking for the right beat and bass tracks. Hopefully by the end of the year.

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                                    • Jakez
                                      Confirmed User
                                      • Jan 2004
                                      • 5656

                                      #19
                                      [email protected] - jakezdumb - 573689400

                                      Killuminati

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                                      • Zuzana Designs
                                        All Your Design Needs
                                        • Feb 2005
                                        • 20896

                                        #20
                                        Originally posted by Jakez
                                        That's awesome

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                                        • Jakez
                                          Confirmed User
                                          • Jan 2004
                                          • 5656

                                          #21
                                          "Better call the fire department I've hired a arson to set fire to carpet and burn up your entire apartment", insane. Tip: never compare yourself to Eminem lol.
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                                          • GAMEFINEST
                                            Make STACK$
                                            • Nov 2006
                                            • 14478

                                            #22
                                            yalll wanna be rappersz..
                                            Compound interest.

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                                            • JD
                                              Too lazy to set a custom title
                                              • Sep 2003
                                              • 22651

                                              #23
                                              oh man....

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                                              • John-ACWM
                                                Work Work Work
                                                • Nov 2008
                                                • 20060

                                                #24
                                                Some nice lyrics and rimes in here

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                                                • Zuzana Designs
                                                  All Your Design Needs
                                                  • Feb 2005
                                                  • 20896

                                                  #25
                                                  Originally posted by GAMEFINEST
                                                  yalll wanna be rappersz..
                                                  I don't want to be a rapperz I am a rapperz

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                                                  • StinkyPink
                                                    It's all goooood.
                                                    • Aug 2009
                                                    • 1591

                                                    #26
                                                    Originally posted by John-ACWM
                                                    Some nice lyrics and rimes in here
                                                    Thanks.

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                                                    • JamesK
                                                      hi
                                                      • Jun 2002
                                                      • 16731

                                                      #27
                                                      hahah yo, let me spit some shit:

                                                      OK - I've had it guys, listen.
                                                      I'ma mess your brains up with my lyrical wisdom
                                                      Steadily crafting words with deep impact, reaching galaxies BEYOND your vision (WHAT?)
                                                      Like meteorites I fall upon your styles, creating a collision with tactical precision
                                                      Cuz I'm on a mission - disassemble ANY fake nigga in this business with no ambition (wooord)
                                                      Part-timers acting like big shots... Newsflash: talking smack will not get your dick sucked.
                                                      You think you're onto something. You in the game for big bucks... Really?
                                                      In reality you get fist fucked violently like Clara-G in Fist Flush. Don't try to play me.

                                                      * BRAP BRAP *

                                                      You wondering why you can't make it? The truth is you lazy .
                                                      Your business skills are non existent, like Big-D. Yet you talk like you're big hahaha?
                                                      Coming up hard; thinking you can live life, fully free?
                                                      Your soul is destined to be a slave of society. Get back to flipping burgers, maybe?
                                                      The sheer amount of stupidity flowing through your brains never ceases to amazes me.
                                                      Now listen to your momma and get a degree.

                                                      * gun clappin *

                                                      Betta check yourself before you wreck yourself. Nigga whattt
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                                                      • ReggieDurango
                                                        Confirmed User
                                                        • Nov 2007
                                                        • 4784

                                                        #28
                                                        Originally posted by StinkyPink
                                                        My take on this business.

                                                        My deliverance sentences all of you with no resistance
                                                        Gettin lifted from the prescence of my lyrical existence
                                                        Livin' in a twisted image, sleepin deep within your vision
                                                        Situations gettin' thin and this is just the begining.
                                                        So sit back and pay attention to this lesson I'm presentin'
                                                        Let your mind attract the facts and react with pro precision
                                                        What you need to do is listen, picture me in my position
                                                        Get your differences fixed, quit contradicting your decisions.

                                                        A proposition fo' niggas that's sellin' bitches fo' figgas
                                                        If it's the only way to get it, and you want it, go get it
                                                        As a witness to po' pimpin', gettin' womens a business
                                                        And all the bitches in the shit is in top physical fitness
                                                        The shit is wild nigga, so take this shit in progression
                                                        Go get some fits that fit these bitches that be in your possession
                                                        Don't be stressin' on this lesson, get your hoes to invest in
                                                        Some clothes for hoes that only go with a selective collection

                                                        Contemplate on gettin' paper, cause theres paper to get and
                                                        Playa hatas hatin' playas and the pussy they pimpin'
                                                        This shit is gettin' kind of sick, and I ain't takin it pimp
                                                        The only hoes I grow to know are those with money to spend
                                                        So if you want in, get in, we'll split the dividends
                                                        If it ever comes to an end I'll leave no evidence
                                                        Remember it's the money, my honeys, that's what I represent
                                                        I put you up on game trick ass niggas but your hesitant

                                                        Fuck it...
                                                        Which song of his is this from???

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                                                        • sweetcuties
                                                          Confirmed User
                                                          • Feb 2002
                                                          • 5859

                                                          #29
                                                          Good track, never heard that before... I have his first 2 cd's

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                                                          • CaptainHowdy
                                                            Too lazy to set a custom title
                                                            • Dec 2004
                                                            • 94733

                                                            #30
                                                            Alrighty then...

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                                                            • StinkyPink
                                                              It's all goooood.
                                                              • Aug 2009
                                                              • 1591

                                                              #31
                                                              Originally posted by ReggieDurango
                                                              Which song of his is this from???
                                                              Haha, I wrote that silly.

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                                                              • StinkyPink
                                                                It's all goooood.
                                                                • Aug 2009
                                                                • 1591

                                                                #32
                                                                Originally posted by JamesK
                                                                hahah yo, let me spit some shit:

                                                                OK - I've had it guys, listen.
                                                                I'ma mess your brains up with my lyrical wisdom
                                                                Steadily crafting words with deep impact, reaching galaxies BEYOND your vision (WHAT?)
                                                                Like meteorites I fall upon your styles, creating a collision with tactical precision
                                                                Cuz I'm on a mission - disassemble ANY fake nigga in this business with no ambition (wooord)
                                                                Part-timers acting like big shots... Newsflash: talking smack will not get your dick sucked.
                                                                You think you're onto something. You in the game for big bucks... Really?
                                                                In reality you get fist fucked violently like Clara-G in Fist Flush. Don't try to play me.

                                                                * BRAP BRAP *

                                                                You wondering why you can't make it? The truth is you lazy .
                                                                Your business skills are non existent, like Big-D. Yet you talk like you're big hahaha?
                                                                Coming up hard; thinking you can live life, fully free?
                                                                Your soul is destined to be a slave of society. Get back to flipping burgers, maybe?
                                                                The sheer amount of stupidity flowing through your brains never ceases to amazes me.
                                                                Now listen to your momma and get a degree.

                                                                * gun clappin *

                                                                Betta check yourself before you wreck yourself. Nigga whattt
                                                                Haha, cool.

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                                                                • JamesK
                                                                  hi
                                                                  • Jun 2002
                                                                  • 16731

                                                                  #33
                                                                  Originally posted by StinkyPink
                                                                  Haha, cool.
                                                                  hahah, thanks. you and Zuzana rocked it harder though
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                                                                  • munki
                                                                    Do Fun Shit.
                                                                    • Dec 2004
                                                                    • 13393

                                                                    #34
                                                                    Originally posted by Jon Oso
                                                                    :walks on stage:
                                                                    :looks around:
                                                                    "Fuck you, bitches."
                                                                    : Drops mic and walks out:

                                                                    /thread.

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                                                                    • Zuzana Designs
                                                                      All Your Design Needs
                                                                      • Feb 2005
                                                                      • 20896

                                                                      #35
                                                                      Hook that I will sing when I get to the studio -

                                                                      Started off as a small fish in a big (net) pond
                                                                      Felt so helpless and so all alone
                                                                      Feeling like a little girl in porn’s chauvinist world
                                                                      It only pushed me harder

                                                                      All these players falling at my side
                                                                      Where all your bros at pumping up your pride
                                                                      Looks like the little fish turned out to be the hottest shit
                                                                      Zuzana Designs busting rhymes, brings you the hottest hits

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                                                                      • Zuzana Designs
                                                                        All Your Design Needs
                                                                        • Feb 2005
                                                                        • 20896

                                                                        #36
                                                                        Originally posted by JamesK
                                                                        hahah yo, let me spit some shit:

                                                                        OK - I've had it guys, listen.
                                                                        I'ma mess your brains up with my lyrical wisdom
                                                                        Steadily crafting words with deep impact, reaching galaxies BEYOND your vision (WHAT?)
                                                                        Like meteorites I fall upon your styles, creating a collision with tactical precision
                                                                        Cuz I'm on a mission - disassemble ANY fake nigga in this business with no ambition (wooord)
                                                                        Part-timers acting like big shots... Newsflash: talking smack will not get your dick sucked.
                                                                        You think you're onto something. You in the game for big bucks... Really?
                                                                        In reality you get fist fucked violently like Clara-G in Fist Flush. Don't try to play me.

                                                                        * BRAP BRAP *

                                                                        You wondering why you can't make it? The truth is you lazy .
                                                                        Your business skills are non existent, like Big-D. Yet you talk like you're big hahaha?
                                                                        Coming up hard; thinking you can live life, fully free?
                                                                        Your soul is destined to be a slave of society. Get back to flipping burgers, maybe?
                                                                        The sheer amount of stupidity flowing through your brains never ceases to amazes me.
                                                                        Now listen to your momma and get a degree.

                                                                        * gun clappin *

                                                                        Betta check yourself before you wreck yourself. Nigga whattt
                                                                        I love the nigga whattt and (wooord) haha. the * gun clappin * was pretty sweet too.

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                                                                        • JamesK
                                                                          hi
                                                                          • Jun 2002
                                                                          • 16731

                                                                          #37
                                                                          Originally posted by Zuzana Designs
                                                                          I love the nigga whattt and (wooord) haha. the * gun clappin * was pretty sweet too.
                                                                          Thanks Sarah! It just wasn't complete without the gun clappin.

                                                                          I always wanted to make a track. Maybe just one, to prove to myself I am capable of doing it and to unleash my anger. I have to expand my vocabulary and become a lyrical genius first though, so it will take a few years at least before I can get started

                                                                          Make sure to send over the song to me when you're done. I want to be one of the first to hear it! Love what you're doing
                                                                          Last edited by JamesK; 09-08-2010, 06:11 AM.
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                                                                          • Zuzana Designs
                                                                            All Your Design Needs
                                                                            • Feb 2005
                                                                            • 20896

                                                                            #38
                                                                            Originally posted by JamesK
                                                                            Thanks Sarah! It just wasn't complete without the gun clappin.

                                                                            I always wanted to make a track. Maybe just one, to prove to myself I am capable of doing it and to unleash my anger. I have to expand my vocabulary and become a lyrical genius first though, so it will take a few years at least before I can get started

                                                                            Make sure to send over the song to me when you're done. I want to be one of the first to hear it! Love what you're doing
                                                                            Thanks J, with all the skills stinkypink, you and myself have we should collaborate and make a sweet track to go on my upcoming album. It will be a few years until I have the time to get it all together. I knew this rapper in Raleigh named The Future several years ago. He was ok but I was a better writer than him. He got himself in trouble with the law and got locked up. I will be sure to shoot you a copy of the song and video when it's all done

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                                                                            • StinkyPink
                                                                              It's all goooood.
                                                                              • Aug 2009
                                                                              • 1591

                                                                              #39
                                                                              Originally posted by Zuzana Designs
                                                                              Thanks J, with all the skills stinkypink, you and myself have we should collaborate and make a sweet track to go on my upcoming album. It will be a few years until I have the time to get it all together. I knew this rapper in Raleigh named The Future several years ago. He was ok but I was a better writer than him. He got himself in trouble with the law and got locked up. I will be sure to shoot you a copy of the song and video when it's all done
                                                                              Sweet lemonade! That would be cool, would love to hear it. Adobe Audition is good for making tracks and you can find beats on soundclick.com Good Luck.

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                                                                              • Zuzana Designs
                                                                                All Your Design Needs
                                                                                • Feb 2005
                                                                                • 20896

                                                                                #40
                                                                                Originally posted by StinkyPink
                                                                                Sweet lemonade! That would be cool, would love to hear it. Adobe Audition is good for making tracks and you can find beats on soundclick.com Good Luck.
                                                                                lol @ Sweet lemonade. I have used Adobe and seen soundclick.com. I will have to sign up when I get time and look around a little more. Thanks for the link

                                                                                I have lots more to write for the song to be anywhere ready for recording though. I will keep you posted

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                                                                                • Zuzana Designs
                                                                                  All Your Design Needs
                                                                                  • Feb 2005
                                                                                  • 20896

                                                                                  #41
                                                                                  I have verse #3 done and I'm almost done with verse #4. I have to clean it all up after that and get in the studio to record this hit.

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                                                                                  • Carmen80
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                                                                                    • Sep 2010
                                                                                    • 207

                                                                                    #42
                                                                                    You are just shitting words.
                                                                                    It's all just a strange dream..

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                                                                                    • PlugRush Sascha
                                                                                      Confirmed User
                                                                                      • Jan 2004
                                                                                      • 2772

                                                                                      #43
                                                                                      This is by far the best thread on GFY right now.
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                                                                                      • KingpinMedia
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                                                                                        • Jan 2005
                                                                                        • 834

                                                                                        #44
                                                                                        Originally posted by ktj4l
                                                                                        This is by far the best thread on GFY right now.
                                                                                        you're just a hater yo


                                                                                        Jason Forrest is a scammer. Pay me my 15k bitch.
                                                                                        http://www.jason-forrest.com/
                                                                                        K-Man, Media and Moses are also scammers

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