Can I get a website critique please? - GoFuckYourself.com

LightscapeMedia · 08-29-2010, 07:38 PM

I am re-working the header area and adding more content. But other than that, can I get a few critiques on the basic design. Also any errors I may have overlooked.

It is the Phoenix Erotica link in my signature.

Thanks!

CYF · 08-29-2010, 07:41 PM

Nice clean simple design, I like it.

tony286 · 08-29-2010, 07:46 PM

is it an employment site or tgp ? I clicked on one model and got a gallery.

LightscapeMedia · 08-29-2010, 07:47 PM

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Originally Posted by tony299

is it an employment site or tgp ? I clicked on one model and got a gallery.

It's primarily an employment site, but I get a lot of lookie-loos, figured I might as well try and make some money off of them too.

DBS.US · 08-29-2010, 07:54 PM

Keep your pimp hand strong

SallyRand · 08-29-2010, 08:13 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by LightscapeMedia

I am re-working the header area and adding more content. But other than that, can I get a few critiques on the basic design. Also any errors I may have overlooked.

It is the Phoenix Erotica link in my signature.

Thanks!

I like it! Nice clean design, simple and communicates effectively.

Sally.

CunningStunt · 08-29-2010, 09:36 PM

You should make the first link on the splash page Enter rather than Exit. Those words are too far apart as well.

I like the simple bloggy design once you're in.

ottopottomouse · 08-30-2010, 03:33 AM

ENTER EXIT is hanging to the left of centre a bit and looks wrong with WARNING being centred.

red line and WARNING aren't showing in IE for me.

EXIT link goes to yahoo. send it to somewhere that might earn you something like a t-shirt shop.

is the home page an ftv TGP or will it actually show models you own?

nice clean design though

can't decide if the Models Wanted page actually wants models or is a catcher for exgf type stuff? Would have expected an agency to have proper contact details listed.

08-29-2010, 07:38 PM	#1
LightscapeMedia DirtyPeach.com Industry Role: Join Date: May 2010 Location: I'm mobile Posts: 828	Can I get a website critique please? I am re-working the header area and adding more content. But other than that, can I get a few critiques on the basic design. Also any errors I may have overlooked. It is the Phoenix Erotica link in my signature. Thanks! __________________

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08-30-2010, 03:33 AM	#8
ottopottomouse She is ugly, bad luck. Industry Role: Join Date: Jan 2010 Posts: 13,177	ENTER EXIT is hanging to the left of centre a bit and looks wrong with WARNING being centred. red line and WARNING aren't showing in IE for me. EXIT link goes to yahoo. send it to somewhere that might earn you something like a t-shirt shop. is the home page an ftv TGP or will it actually show models you own? nice clean design though can't decide if the Models Wanted page actually wants models or is a catcher for exgf type stuff? Would have expected an agency to have proper contact details listed. __________________ ↑ see post ↑ 13101

08-29-2010, 07:46 PM	#3
tony286 lurker Industry Role: Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: atlanta Posts: 57,021	is it an employment site or tgp ? I clicked on one model and got a gallery.

08-29-2010, 09:36 PM	#7
CunningStunt Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 5,594	You should make the first link on the splash page Enter rather than Exit. Those words are too far apart as well. I like the simple bloggy design once you're in.