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Simon Templar · 02-12-2010, 09:18 PM

i will input my vod and member section next week www.eldiablodvd.com and i wil use the same template for 2 other membership website . with www.patriciapetite.com i will be able to start with 200 scenes . 140 of those scenes are complete exclusive . if anybody wants to work with me as reference , just let me know
Thanks

born2blog · 02-12-2010, 09:29 PM

one of the nicer looking sites I've seen in a while, cool logo, hot chicks, nice clean layout

Jack OAT · 02-13-2010, 01:02 AM

Ok. You asked..

Logo is terrible...
flames are shit
toon is shit
can barely read the actual text
random red lines?

BUT, the version of the logo in the trailers is ok.

Header is WAY too big..
NO content at all above the fold.
Girls in the header were extracted shitty
whole thing just looks ugly (no call to action)

The French and English text is not a terrible idea, but confusing the way it's done.

The layout of the actual content isn't too bad, but if the header were done correctly, and the content moved up, then it could be organized a bit better.

People will probably say the surfers don't care about the logo, but that is your brand. Also the domain is eldiablo but the "el" in the logo is almost invisible. That shit needs to be clear so it sticks in their brains like a magnet.

JD · 02-13-2010, 02:47 AM

i'll redesign it

Jack OAT · 02-13-2010, 06:08 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by JD

i'll redesign it

probably just wanted to hear "looks great"

Amputate Your Head · 02-13-2010, 06:53 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Jack OAT

Ok. You asked..

Logo is terrible...
flames are shit
toon is shit
can barely read the actual text
random red lines?

BUT, the version of the logo in the trailers is ok.

Header is WAY too big..
NO content at all above the fold.
Girls in the header were extracted shitty
whole thing just looks ugly (no call to action)

The French and English text is not a terrible idea, but confusing the way it's done.

The layout of the actual content isn't too bad, but if the header were done correctly, and the content moved up, then it could be organized a bit better.

People will probably say the surfers don't care about the logo, but that is your brand. Also the domain is eldiablo but the "el" in the logo is almost invisible. That shit needs to be clear so it sticks in their brains like a magnet.

I'm gonna hafta go ahead and sort of agree with that here. Yeah.

The other site, Patricia Petite, is possibly worse.

Bad logo
Bad color scheme
Atrocious typography
Bad layout
Bad image masking
Non-existent color correction
inconsistent effects (shadows)
Wanton abuse of the "Glow" filter
Bad random spacing of just about everything

I have to stop. It's burning my eyes.
Sorry, but the whole thing should be deleted with military grade prejudice and started over.

AmeliaG · 02-13-2010, 08:39 PM

I'd prefer it if you removed the traffic leaks at the bottom of the page.

DamianJ · 02-14-2010, 07:48 AM

Which company designed these sites?

How much did they charge you?

V_RocKs · 02-15-2010, 12:05 PM

YOU / EVERYONE ELSE

The difference? They convert.

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DG_Nick · 02-15-2010, 12:57 PM

I would resize the DVD box thumbnails to fill in some of that negative space. The video also didn't download very fast, and I am on a T1 line (used Firefox).

slayer69 · 02-15-2010, 01:22 PM

looks pretty good

alias · 02-15-2010, 01:28 PM

Rough crowd. The girls in the header are definitely hot, the graphic itself is kind of "tall". The way the site starts out in a confined manner then drops out to a background intensive lower half makes it less cohesive than it could be.

Simon Templar · 02-16-2010, 08:56 AM

thanks for you comment .i have better version of my logo... i will change it . the patriciapetite.com gonna be completely shut down and remake wiyh new color and logo.
maybe i should work on header and grafic , but its sex i trying to sold , and i have very good content , soft ,hardcore and fetish . i work on that and i will combeback for a new review when my 3 membership will be online. thanks to taking time to review my site

02-12-2010, 09:18 PM	#1
Simon Templar Registered User Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: montreal Posts: 96	Can you review my website i will input my vod and member section next week www.eldiablodvd.com and i wil use the same template for 2 other membership website . with www.patriciapetite.com i will be able to start with 200 scenes . 140 of those scenes are complete exclusive . if anybody wants to work with me as reference , just let me know Thanks __________________ www.eldiablodvd.com www.patriciapetite.com

02-12-2010, 09:29 PM	#2
born2blog Confirmed User Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 1,801	one of the nicer looking sites I've seen in a while, cool logo, hot chicks, nice clean layout __________________ Juicy Ads - Buy & Sell Quality Traffic!!

02-13-2010, 01:02 AM	#3
Jack OAT Confirmed User Join Date: Nov 2009 Posts: 176	Ok. You asked.. Logo is terrible... flames are shit toon is shit can barely read the actual text random red lines? BUT, the version of the logo in the trailers is ok. Header is WAY too big.. NO content at all above the fold. Girls in the header were extracted shitty whole thing just looks ugly (no call to action) The French and English text is not a terrible idea, but confusing the way it's done. The layout of the actual content isn't too bad, but if the header were done correctly, and the content moved up, then it could be organized a bit better. People will probably say the surfers don't care about the logo, but that is your brand. Also the domain is eldiablo but the "el" in the logo is almost invisible. That shit needs to be clear so it sticks in their brains like a magnet. __________________ my icq...... 615294405..... .....jackoatwebmaster@gmail I am a webmaster toolbox.. I can do it all.. I am Jack OAT mobile sites + xhtml/css + design + wordpress + script install/integration

02-13-2010, 08:39 PM	#7
AmeliaG Too lazy to set a custom title Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 10,572	I'd prefer it if you removed the traffic leaks at the bottom of the page. __________________ GFY Hall of Famer AltStar Hall of Famer Blue Blood's SpookyCash.com Babe photography portfolio

02-15-2010, 12:05 PM	#9
V_RocKs Damn Right I Kiss Ass! Industry Role: Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Cowtown, USA Posts: 32,422	YOU / EVERYONE ELSE The difference? They convert. . Last edited by V_RocKs; 02-15-2010 at 12:07 PM..

02-13-2010, 02:47 AM	#4
JD Too lazy to set a custom title Industry Role: Join Date: Sep 2003 Posts: 22,651	i'll redesign it

02-14-2010, 07:48 AM	#8
DamianJ Too lazy to set a custom title Industry Role: Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: A magical land Posts: 15,808	Which company designed these sites? How much did they charge you?

02-15-2010, 12:57 PM	#10
DG_Nick Registered User Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: Patterson, CA Posts: 93	I would resize the DVD box thumbnails to fill in some of that negative space. The video also didn't download very fast, and I am on a T1 line (used Firefox). __________________ "It's not music if you're not moshing!"

02-15-2010, 01:22 PM	#11
slayer69 Confirmed User Join Date: Oct 2008 Posts: 626	looks pretty good

02-15-2010, 01:28 PM	#12
alias aliasx Join Date: Apr 2001 Posts: 19,010	Rough crowd. The girls in the header are definitely hot, the graphic itself is kind of "tall". The way the site starts out in a confined manner then drops out to a background intensive lower half makes it less cohesive than it could be. __________________ https://porncorporation.com

02-16-2010, 08:56 AM	#13
Simon Templar Registered User Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: montreal Posts: 96	thanks for you comment .i have better version of my logo... i will change it . the patriciapetite.com gonna be completely shut down and remake wiyh new color and logo. maybe i should work on header and grafic , but its sex i trying to sold , and i have very good content , soft ,hardcore and fetish . i work on that and i will combeback for a new review when my 3 membership will be online. thanks to taking time to review my site __________________ www.eldiablodvd.com www.patriciapetite.com