Critique & Feedback - New Reality site - GoFuckYourself.com

Dugmor · 11-01-2002, 08:15 PM

We just added a new reality site called French Fuck Faces to our collection of high converting sites. The theme is based on American fucking French Sluts 8 ways till Sunday !
I ran spell and grammar check but I am sure there are still some errors. There is sentences mixed with French words to keep with the theme. So please keep that in mind.
We tried to pick the best color combinations but would like some feed back from designers as well, on both the site and the Banners

We also made some pre made gallery templates for TGP's
Pre-made gallery template one
Pre-made gallery template two

I am open to constructive criticism please.

Thanks in advance
Dugmor
ICQ 45771964

If you want to check out the
Free content for French Fuck Faces

Evil Chris · 11-01-2002, 09:21 PM

Hey Dugmor, the site has an interesting concept and based on the content I know you produce I'm sure that it will work out great for you. But the design is like a handful of other designs I've seen...
Also nice use of the little fucking stick men... not sure if they are yours to use, though.

Good luck with the site.

frankfortuna · 11-01-2002, 09:25 PM

The first thing that struck me when I arrived at the site is the members navigation on the entrance page. I would move it elsewhere, it could be confusing to non-members.

SykkBoy · 11-01-2002, 09:27 PM

Looking good there Dugmor....

I think I've seen your cock more than I've seen my own....lol

Dugmor · 11-01-2002, 09:42 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Evil Chris
But the design is like a handful of other designs I've seen...

You must me looking at my designs on some other sites

Quote:

Originally posted by frankfortuna
The first thing that struck me when I arrived at the site is the members navigation on the entrance page. I would move it elsewhere, it could be confusing to non-members.

The main index is only for type-in traffic. All traffic is linked to
this Index

frankfortuna · 11-01-2002, 09:43 PM

Gotcha.

I have to admit, it seems pretty tame for you. Feeling a bit soft these days?

jennycards · 11-01-2002, 11:15 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Dugmor

The main index is only for type-in traffic. All traffic is linked to
this Index

Much better!!

Dugmor · 11-02-2002, 12:41 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by frankfortuna
Gotcha.

I have to admit, it seems pretty tame for you. Feeling a bit soft these days?

We like to diversify our portfolio of sites. We have a lot more surprises real soon.
We shot this content over a year ago and has been just sitting in a box. Most of the content that we are now releasing has been shot in the last year. We have a few more sites coming out and we have enough updates for over 2 months for all the sites.
We still shoot almost everyday so for sure things are not soft around here

CowboyAtHeart · 11-02-2002, 12:43 AM

Help! Support all web browsers! I can't see the pictures!
I use Lynx!

becca · 11-02-2002, 12:44 AM

Disclaimer: I'm not married to him, really.

Turboface · 11-02-2002, 01:19 AM

Interesting.

cat · 11-02-2002, 01:22 AM

i don't like the frontpage, the second page is very good!

frankfortuna · 11-02-2002, 01:26 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Dugmor

We like to diversify our portfolio of sites. We have a lot more surprises real soon.
We shot this content over a year ago and has been just sitting in a box. Most of the content that we are now releasing has been shot in the last year. We have a few more sites coming out and we have enough updates for over 2 months for all the sites.
We still shoot almost everyday so for sure things are not soft around here

Please note that I was just jerking your chain. The lack of fishhook scenes took me by surprise.

Dugmor · 11-02-2002, 02:06 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by cat
i don't like the frontpage, the second page is very good!

The main index is just for type in traffic. I never send any traffic directly to the front page or main index. I thought I explained that with frankfortuna's first comment.

Just for the record. All affiliate traffic will link this index there is never any traffic leaks not even to my webmaster program

edmo · 11-02-2002, 02:19 AM

i've never been to france but the mexican and asian looking girls on the second page should be switched for more frenchie looking ones. and there's also this theory that french chicks don't shave so you could play that up somewhere. on the add my email, you'll probably get more signups with some sort of "we won't sell your email or add you to spam lists" statement.

on the individual pages say...
http://www.frenchfuckfaces.com/girls/desiree/index.html
i can see all the other girls but i'd like to click on them and go to their page. but i cannot.

sample movies would be nice as well.

otherwise it looks nice.

Dugmor · 11-02-2002, 02:51 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by edmo
i've never been to france but the mexican and asian looking girls on the second page should be switched for more frenchie looking ones.

First of all thanks for the input and feed back

It is true we did use the flag from France and some famous landmarks from France but just for your information France in not the only country that speaks French and has French girls. Here is a site of French Speaking Countries . It has some really nice music. Does that make it more believable ........hehehe

Quote:

Originally posted by edmo
on the individual pages say...
http://www.frenchfuckfaces.com/girls/desiree/index.html
i can see all the other girls but i'd like to click on them and go to their page. but i cannot.

We did that on some of the other tours for our sites and it is a very good point. We thought of it and where trying not to confuse the surfer and send them to the join page. But if you think I should have them surf a bit more with out have to back up I guess we can change it .

Do you think a sample movie with all the girls as "a best of" or a sample movie for each girl is better. I think the sites with all those trailers is a bit too much. If you have like 20 girls and each girl's sample movie is a minute. That give the free surfer a lot of entertainment and possibly enough time to jerk off.

Brown Bear · 11-02-2002, 02:56 AM

Quebec is a country now?

ServerGenius · 11-02-2002, 03:12 AM

Like the main page allthough the layout is of the "Stories" looks
very much like www.brunob.com it's obvious you used that as
inspiration.....

Good luck with it.

DynaMite

ServerGenius · 11-02-2002, 03:14 AM

Oh and none of the girls looks even a bit French.....but who cares
yanks don't know anyway

DynaMite

Voodoo · 11-02-2002, 03:15 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Dugmor
We just added a new reality site called....
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So please keep that in mind.
We tried to pick the best color combinations but would like some feed back from designers...

Why should I tell you?

Dugmor · 11-02-2002, 11:18 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by DynaSpain
Like the main page allthough the layout is of the "Stories" looks
very much like www.brunob. com it's obvious you used that as
inspiration.....

Good luck with it.

DynaMite

I consider Bruno and the guys at Gamma my friends. So I am going to take that as a compliment. But if Bruno really wrote those stories they would look more like my text with English words mixed with French.

Just for the record:
The first site in our porfolio We Fuck in Public was built over a year before Bruno B was created. I was not so vein to call the site dugmor but I am the main character in that site. The site is based around my sex life.

The original tour from BrunoB was inspired from gallery/tour that was used to upsell an ARS site than ran on the top spots on The Hun for months.

ServerGenius · 11-02-2002, 11:26 AM

That's what I meant....they layout of the stories 2 large thumbs next to the text and small thumbs underneath.....not the text
itself......again...site looks nice and clean I wish you all the luck
with it.....I did not mean to offend or badmouth.....

DynaMite

edmo · 11-02-2002, 11:27 AM

maybe instead of
"+ See these Girls get Gang Bang for the First Time !"
you have "Check out these sample movies"
and then a page of like 3 or 4 little mpegs.
i think the sample movies help convince people to part with their credit cards a lot faster.

Shoplifter · 11-02-2002, 02:12 PM

Looks good, I know a few guys who will give it a go.

Dugmor · 11-02-2002, 04:26 PM

Thanks for the Feedback everyone.

Anyone that used the code generator make sure you Change the "CODE" in the linking codes to your CC Bill affiliate partner number.

If you have any questions call me at

1-514-841-2650
or
ICQ 45771964

mongoose403 · 11-02-2002, 05:08 PM

did you use frontpage to design it?

spanky · 11-02-2002, 05:44 PM

http://www.frenchfuckfaces.com/girls/lanie_2/index.html

'duex' should be 'deux'

11-01-2002, 08:15 PM	#1
Dugmor The Traffic Cowboy Industry Role: Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: BP4L - Vice Prez Posts: 7,596	Critique & Feedback - New Reality site We just added a new reality site called French Fuck Faces to our collection of high converting sites. The theme is based on American fucking French Sluts 8 ways till Sunday ! I ran spell and grammar check but I am sure there are still some errors. There is sentences mixed with French words to keep with the theme. So please keep that in mind. We tried to pick the best color combinations but would like some feed back from designers as well, on both the site and the Banners We also made some pre made gallery templates for TGP's Pre-made gallery template one Pre-made gallery template two I am open to constructive criticism please. Thanks in advance Dugmor ICQ 45771964 If you want to check out the Free content for French Fuck Faces __________________ JesusEmpire - The Most Trusted Mobile Marketing Service SMS Verification codes for 345 websites including: Tinder - Bumble - Twitter - TikTok - Instagram - Facebook

11-01-2002, 09:21 PM	#2
Evil Chris OG Industry Role: Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: 3rd from the Sun Posts: 13,233	Hey Dugmor, the site has an interesting concept and based on the content I know you produce I'm sure that it will work out great for you. But the design is like a handful of other designs I've seen... Also nice use of the little fucking stick men... not sure if they are yours to use, though. Good luck with the site. __________________ It PAYZE to post on GFY chris at payze.com \| Skype chriswrp Last edited by Evil Chris; 11-01-2002 at 09:30 PM..

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11-01-2002, 09:25 PM	#3
frankfortuna Confirmed User Join Date: Aug 2002 Posts: 1,504	The first thing that struck me when I arrived at the site is the members navigation on the entrance page. I would move it elsewhere, it could be confusing to non-members.

11-01-2002, 09:43 PM	#6
frankfortuna Confirmed User Join Date: Aug 2002 Posts: 1,504	Gotcha. I have to admit, it seems pretty tame for you. Feeling a bit soft these days?

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11-02-2002, 01:22 AM	#12
cat Registered User Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: europe Posts: 493	i don't like the frontpage, the second page is very good!

11-02-2002, 02:19 AM	#15
edmo Confirmed User Join Date: Jun 2002 Location: SanHo Posts: 359	i've never been to france but the mexican and asian looking girls on the second page should be switched for more frenchie looking ones. and there's also this theory that french chicks don't shave so you could play that up somewhere. on the add my email, you'll probably get more signups with some sort of "we won't sell your email or add you to spam lists" statement. on the individual pages say... http://www.frenchfuckfaces.com/girls/desiree/index.html i can see all the other girls but i'd like to click on them and go to their page. but i cannot. sample movies would be nice as well. otherwise it looks nice.

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11-02-2002, 03:12 AM	#18
ServerGenius Confirmed User Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Amsterdam Posts: 9,377	Like the main page allthough the layout is of the "Stories" looks very much like www.brunob.com it's obvious you used that as inspiration..... Good luck with it. DynaMite __________________ \| http://www.sinnerscash.com/ \| ICQ: 370820 \| Skype: SinnersCash \| AdultWhosWho \|

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11-02-2002, 11:26 AM	#22
ServerGenius Confirmed User Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Amsterdam Posts: 9,377	That's what I meant....they layout of the stories 2 large thumbs next to the text and small thumbs underneath.....not the text itself......again...site looks nice and clean I wish you all the luck with it.....I did not mean to offend or badmouth..... DynaMite __________________ \| http://www.sinnerscash.com/ \| ICQ: 370820 \| Skype: SinnersCash \| AdultWhosWho \|

11-02-2002, 11:27 AM	#23
edmo Confirmed User Join Date: Jun 2002 Location: SanHo Posts: 359	maybe instead of "+ See these Girls get Gang Bang for the First Time !" you have "Check out these sample movies" and then a page of like 3 or 4 little mpegs. i think the sample movies help convince people to part with their credit cards a lot faster.

11-02-2002, 02:12 PM	#24
Shoplifter Richest man in Babylon Industry Role: Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Posts: 10,002 Posts: 5,725	Looks good, I know a few guys who will give it a go.

11-02-2002, 04:26 PM	#25
Dugmor The Traffic Cowboy Industry Role: Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: BP4L - Vice Prez Posts: 7,596	Thanks for the Feedback everyone. Anyone that used the code generator make sure you Change the "CODE" in the linking codes to your CC Bill affiliate partner number. If you have any questions call me at 1-514-841-2650 or ICQ 45771964 __________________ JesusEmpire - The Most Trusted Mobile Marketing Service SMS Verification codes for 345 websites including: Tinder - Bumble - Twitter - TikTok - Instagram - Facebook

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11-02-2002, 05:44 PM	#27
spanky Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Apr 2002 Posts: 231	http://www.frenchfuckfaces.com/girls/lanie_2/index.html 'duex' should be 'deux'