A poem I just wrote for a girl while drunk...

this is the first poem that I have ever written to a girl. What do you think? I was drunk and this shit is straight from me, came out with ease.


I just wanted to drink with my boys
next thing I knew I was getting rubbed up on by you
the game was fun and I kicked ass but then I found myself wanting to tap that ass
my mind went wild as I was thinkin damn these are the thoughts that conceived my first child
as you whispered in my ear and called me dear
I found myself getting near to that desire that I wanted
even though I was a little blunted i got your number some how
2 days later I was like fuckin wow
as I sat on a balcony of darkness after a good fuck
I was thinkin damn ain't this some good luck
You looked into my eyes and it hurt me so much
I wanted to die because I new this was just too much
but still I blew the smoke in your ear
saying everything you wanted to hear
hoping that one good fuck was near
I got addicted to your eyes and it saw past your lies
but thats ok I had them too and it made us both loose our cool
but Im no fool so I kept trying to play the game
hoping I would get my aim
but who is to blame for all the shame
but that 12 ounce bottle of wickedness
I guess we might not get that last fuck
and that will suck but thats life and i will not strive anymore
because I realized you are just a fuckin whore.