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wanted 04-30-2008 09:48 PM

smokin' !!

lhizy_05 05-01-2008 07:47 AM

:thumbsup very nice pics!!!:thumbsup

Scott McD 05-01-2008 08:00 AM

Very nice indeed !!!

vidvicious 05-01-2008 08:15 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by JayAllan (Post 14134377)
Since you asked,

I hate to say it Mutt, but I don't like it. The reason is that it has the POTENTIAL to be a great pic, but is marred by sloppy photography. You have a great model and a great location with beautiful light. So a great shot here should be a no brainer. Here is the problem...

The horizon is not straight. One could argue that a tilted horizon is an artistic touch, however it would need to be much greater to work in this composition. In this case it is just off enough to be distracting. It pulls the viewer into the top left corner.

The models hands are cut off. Water and limbs are tricky, but the rule is only cut above the knees or above the elbows. Here her hands need to be lifted slightly. At least her left hand.

The boat actually does suck. Putting the boat in just to go "cool I got a boat in the shot" is not reason enough. If it was a red boat, or a more interesting boat it might add to the image. Here it is just a distraction. I would rather look at the girl!

You have a tangent where her elbow meets her side. Moving her right hand back would reveal her other breast and pull her elbow up to meet her side better

On the other hand...

The models feet are positioned great, the hips are great. She is definitely stunning. I definitely give kudos to the photographer as well. I am just being picky since you asked. I have certainly taken far worse pictures and published them!






Here is a quick one minute photoshop to give you an idea of the horizon and boat difference

http://www.jayscans.com/image/gfy/linds_water.jpg

Just my :2 cents:

Jay Allan

the shot would of also had more impact if the camera came down lower ... less from above

markz08 05-01-2008 08:18 AM

i find it cool...and the model is hot and cute so i don't think i'll have a problem staring at it...hahaha

Peter Romero 05-01-2008 08:32 AM

I love the shot but have to agree with Jay Allen. He pointed out things that I didn't notice at first that bugged me in the back of my mind. The thing about the hands - I'll have to agree 100% - something driven home to me by an old friend Ron Vogel. I'm in the process of designing and building an infinity pool and this shot reminds me to make the wet deck @ the waterfall wider and less distracting. All in all - great shot though, and model.

Marketing Yoda 05-01-2008 09:07 AM

To infinity, that edge goes.

CurrentlySober 05-01-2008 09:20 AM

Well we are going down the path of suggested improvements, Id like to add...
























http://americantrailers.com/c.jpg

Much less distraction...

Mutt 05-01-2008 09:28 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ThatGuyInTheCorner (Post 14137067)
Well we are going down the path of suggested improvements, Id like to add...
























http://americantrailers.com/c.jpg

Much less distraction...


:1orglaugh


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