Please give me feedback on my redesigned solo girl tour - GoFuckYourself.com

Darrell · 02-19-2008, 04:30 AM

I've just redesigned the free tour on my solo girl site and would like some feedback. Particularly if there is anything I can do to improve it

http://www.justinesbedroom.net/home.html

Thanks.

k0nr4d · 02-19-2008, 04:38 AM

I love it, except for a couple of things,
- I don't like how the background of the blocks with the 4 thumbs is white where the text is
- I'm not feeling the menu. Especially, on the Stories/MP3's word, because the / is at a diff angle then all the adidas-logo looking triangles separating each menu item

Darrell · 02-19-2008, 04:50 AM

Thanks for the comments k0nr4d. I'm not too happy with the menu either and will try and do something different. Do you think I should leave the background where the text is as the same colour as the rest of the box?

kowalsky · 02-19-2008, 05:29 AM

- The corners of the tables where are showed 4 pictures looks awful! Like those borders were made in low resolution. Can you see how break the line?

- And this is an opition, very subjetive because it always depend of the product that you are selling, and I bet your know selling your own product much better than me, but, don´t you think there is too much text? I see very small pictures and lot of text. Is it work for you?

DutchTeenCash · 02-19-2008, 05:51 AM

thats a whole lotta text no SE is gonna pick up

p!nk · 02-19-2008, 06:27 AM

^^
what he said.

why not make those graphical texts into html texts? it's better for SE

02-19-2008, 04:30 AM	#1
Darrell Confirmed User Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: In bed asleep Posts: 803	Please give me feedback on my redesigned solo girl tour I've just redesigned the free tour on my solo girl site and would like some feedback. Particularly if there is anything I can do to improve it http://www.justinesbedroom.net/home.html Thanks.

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k0nr4d Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Poland Posts: 9,228	I love it, except for a couple of things, - I don't like how the background of the blocks with the 4 thumbs is white where the text is - I'm not feeling the menu. Especially, on the Stories/MP3's word, because the / is at a diff angle then all the adidas-logo looking triangles separating each menu item __________________ Mechanical Bunny Media Mechbunny Tube Script \| Mechbunny Webcam Aggregator Script \| Custom Web Development

02-19-2008, 05:29 AM	#4
kowalsky Confirmed User Join Date: Oct 2003 Posts: 2,494	- The corners of the tables where are showed 4 pictures looks awful! Like those borders were made in low resolution. Can you see how break the line? - And this is an opition, very subjetive because it always depend of the product that you are selling, and I bet your know selling your own product much better than me, but, don´t you think there is too much text? I see very small pictures and lot of text. Is it work for you? __________________ Jimmy Kowalsky www.catchycash.com [email protected] ICQ - 7319094

02-19-2008, 05:51 AM	#5
DutchTeenCash I like Dutch Girls Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: dutchteencash.com Posts: 21,684	thats a whole lotta text no SE is gonna pick up __________________ ICQ 16 91 547 - SKYPE dutchteencash bob AT dutchteencash DOT com ... did you see our newest Sweet Natural Girl Priscilla (18)?

02-19-2008, 06:27 AM	#6
p!nk Confirmed User Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: here Posts: 124	^^ what he said. why not make those graphical texts into html texts? it's better for SE __________________ no sig

02-19-2008, 04:50 AM	#3
Darrell Confirmed User Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: In bed asleep Posts: 803	Thanks for the comments k0nr4d. I'm not too happy with the menu either and will try and do something different. Do you think I should leave the background where the text is as the same colour as the rest of the box?