Critique a BJ site and typo's - GoFuckYourself.com

Dugmor · 10-03-2002, 03:35 PM

We am about to release a new site called Blow Job Auditions and I would like some experienced webmasters to tell me if I am going in the right direction. I know my grammar and spelling is not the best so if anyone can spot any errors I would really appreciate the help. We tried to use a standard design and color scheme. If there is anything that I can do to improve the tour I am open to comments. Thanks in Advance

Dugmor!

steffie · 10-03-2002, 03:39 PM

And I wasn't invited for the casting team??

sweetcuties · 10-03-2002, 03:56 PM

Good site

bd2gk2 · 10-03-2002, 05:43 PM

Here's just a little something that I noticed after a quick glance; On the top logo where it says "W're always looking for new cumholes," it should be "We're always looking for new cumholes". Other than that, you've got a winner on your hands!

Easton · 10-03-2002, 05:49 PM

exactly!!! maybe he'll listen to you, he didn't listen to me... LOL

i told him that 3 weeks ago... :D

Dax · 10-03-2002, 05:58 PM

Besides the w're always typo.. i would fix these:

new update - latest update

in the lolipop image: unbelivable should be unbelievable; likes it the face too should be likes it on the face too..

everything else looks good...

Easton · 10-03-2002, 06:04 PM

thanks dude, i had missed those last two, i'll let Dugmor know...

SABAI · 10-03-2002, 09:15 PM

-milf:daisy

"doesn't get anymore hot then that" "than" would do better

-http://www.blowjobauditions.com/ccbill/index.html

"follow the information below" "informationS" would do better

that's all i found

cheers
Sabai

richard123 · 10-03-2002, 09:43 PM

At the bottom of http://www.blowjobauditions.com/index_02.html :
It says "See more pussy then a Gynecologist"
should be
"See more pussy than a Gynecologist"

... and don't use the word "informations". AFAIK it's not a real word. If you wanna fix the sentence in question (even though it's not too bad), make it: "Read the information below and join BJA right now!" or something like that. Information is not normally "followed", that's all. Instructions are followed.

SABAI · 10-03-2002, 11:37 PM

good point richard

lagwagon · 10-04-2002, 02:58 AM

i have a beef with the tifanie story...

it says on the left that she is 21, but at the end of your story you tell the surfer to come inside and watch you blow a load all over this "teens" face..

just not kocher but looks cool

Dugmor · 10-04-2002, 10:21 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by steffie
And I wasn't invited for the casting team??

lol..... Easton and Slim casted the girls ... but you don't need an audition steffie. You are a proffesional

Thanks for all the input everyone

edmo · 10-04-2002, 10:31 AM

all three chicks have fingers in their mouth at some point. kinda silly i think.

Dugmor · 10-04-2002, 12:03 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by edmo
all three chicks have fingers in their mouth at some point. kinda silly i think.

It maybe silly , but it converts like a $2 whore !

We are waiting other content providers to start copying us. As long as you know we branded the " Fish Hook " featured in the " Her First Gang Bang "site

Most hardcore content that you would not do to your own girlfriend or wife is what the " Hardcore " surfers want.

I'm Slim · 10-04-2002, 12:08 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by richard123
At the bottom of http://www.blowjobauditions.com/index_02.html :
It says "See more pussy then a Gynecologist"
should be
"See more pussy than a Gynecologist"

... and don't use the word "informations". AFAIK it's not a real word. If you wanna fix the sentence in question (even though it's not too bad), make it: "Read the information below and join BJA right now!" or something like that. Information is not normally "followed", that's all. Instructions are followed.

Thanks for the info! Im Canadian so its only normal to have bad grammar!

Easton · 10-04-2002, 12:09 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by edmo
all three chicks have fingers in their mouth at some point. kinda silly i think.

fish-hooking rules! and it converts like mad too...

not to mention it's fun to do... hehehehe

Mutt · 10-04-2002, 01:31 PM

looks like the same content as VideoVirgin. maybe just the same girls shot by the same producer. same chicks though.

Dugmor · 10-04-2002, 03:07 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Mutt
looks like the same content as VideoVirgin. maybe just the same girls shot by the same producer. same chicks though.

I take that as a compliment

Easton · 10-04-2002, 03:50 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Mutt
looks like the same content as VideoVirgin. maybe just the same girls shot by the same producer. same chicks though.

as you can see, we keep very busy up here in MTL...

what with so many hot girls and all

Mutt · 10-04-2002, 06:25 PM

do the girls speak good English?

I'm Slim · 10-04-2002, 09:25 PM

Its kind of hard for them to speak when they have 3 cocks in their mouth

10-03-2002, 03:35 PM	#1
Dugmor The Traffic Cowboy Industry Role: Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: BP4L - Vice Prez Posts: 7,607	Critique a BJ site and typo's We am about to release a new site called Blow Job Auditions and I would like some experienced webmasters to tell me if I am going in the right direction. I know my grammar and spelling is not the best so if anyone can spot any errors I would really appreciate the help. We tried to use a standard design and color scheme. If there is anything that I can do to improve the tour I am open to comments. Thanks in Advance Dugmor! __________________ JesusEmpire - The Most Trusted Mobile Marketing Service SMS Verification codes for 345 websites including: Tinder - Bumble - Twitter - TikTok - Instagram - Facebook

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10-03-2002, 05:43 PM	#4
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Dax Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: USA Posts: 3,161	Besides the w're always typo.. i would fix these: new update - latest update in the lolipop image: unbelivable should be unbelievable; likes it the face too should be likes it on the face too.. everything else looks good...

10-03-2002, 06:04 PM	#7
Easton Too lazy to set a custom title Industry Role: Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: Phoenix, AZ Posts: 9,825	thanks dude, i had missed those last two, i'll let Dugmor know... __________________ New models booked and shot every week... MILFs, pornstars and teens. Girls for every niche and project. Looking for high-quality affordable exclusive content? Check me out at Easton Content for all the details.

10-03-2002, 09:15 PM	#8
SABAI Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2001 Location: footmaniac.com Posts: 2,880	-milf:daisy "doesn't get anymore hot then that" "than" would do better -http://www.blowjobauditions.com/ccbill/index.html "follow the information below" "informationS" would do better that's all i found cheers Sabai __________________

10-03-2002, 09:43 PM	#9
richard123 Confirmed User Join Date: Mar 2001 Posts: 491	At the bottom of http://www.blowjobauditions.com/index_02.html : It says "See more pussy then a Gynecologist" should be "See more pussy than a Gynecologist" ... and don't use the word "informations". AFAIK it's not a real word. If you wanna fix the sentence in question (even though it's not too bad), make it: "Read the information below and join BJA right now!" or something like that. Information is not normally "followed", that's all. Instructions are followed.

10-03-2002, 11:37 PM	#10
SABAI Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2001 Location: footmaniac.com Posts: 2,880	good point richard __________________

10-04-2002, 02:58 AM	#11
lagwagon Confirmed User Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: az Posts: 8,464	i have a beef with the tifanie story... it says on the left that she is 21, but at the end of your story you tell the surfer to come inside and watch you blow a load all over this "teens" face.. just not kocher but looks cool __________________ FTVGirls - FTVMilfs - DanielleFTV

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edmo Confirmed User Join Date: Jun 2002 Location: SanHo Posts: 359	all three chicks have fingers in their mouth at some point. kinda silly i think.

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Mutt Too lazy to set a custom title Industry Role: Join Date: Sep 2002 Posts: 34,431	do the girls speak good English? __________________ I moved my sites to Vacares Hosting. I've saved money, my hair is thicker, lost some weight too! Thanks Sly!

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