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What do you designers think about this tour?

11-24-2007, 03:35 PM

http://www.lezboland.com/leznewa.html

I personally don't like something about it but I'm not sure what. Any ideas? I'm a designer but for some reasom all my galleries and other sites look better for some reason to me. But this site gets all my traffic. I'm trying to accomplish something but to me something's off. Maybe the background? Look at the join page it actually looks better then the tour. Trying to boost conversion for XMas.
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11-24-2007, 03:37 PM

looks clean to me. i like it. the only thing i would change is the font on the paragraph of text up top. bold it, or up the size a bit, or change the font or something. it's kind of difficult to read. and maybe take down the amount of space between to pink bars a bit, 20px or so. looks rela nice, those are just my suggestions.

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11-24-2007, 05:16 PM

agreeing with above, find better fonts (nothing too kinky/curvy, just a bit more interesting but still clean and readable) and maybe make some parts of text pink-ish to stand out more.. or even make those linked playtrailer/joinnow parts as rounded rectangle liquid style buttons, if you can keep them clean/discrete enough.. I like the tour generally, nice & simple.

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11-24-2007, 05:22 PM

loads slowly due to too much image based text so the paragraphs need to be html in a vertical scaling table

the bg is atrocious, somehow it spawns memory allusions to rotating skull flashing gifs from the olden days

the spaces between girls are too tall and the right side of said girl based table cells are bland with graphical links that can't hope to fill the negative space due to the fonts slim profile and general lack of context

id make those cells and use html text in there too for more luring and detailed descriptions for each horizontal segment

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11-24-2007, 05:43 PM

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11-24-2007, 05:52 PM

Originally posted by F-U-Jimmy

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i kind of like where the look of it is going, but the background is a little intrusive. try opening it up in photoshop and raising the lightness around 50 points. looks a lil better. i'm also thinking you could knock the top margin to 0px.

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11-24-2007, 06:10 PM

I dont like it ! You must change font!

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11-24-2007, 06:16 PM

fucking awful.

delete it and start over
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11-24-2007, 06:27 PM

Not too fond of Christmas themed background. If you want to keep it for the upcoming season, only use it in the top part of the website and let it blend into while and leave the rest of it single colored with no pattern.
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11-24-2007, 06:35 PM

Originally posted by BigDeanEvans

fucking awful.

delete it and start over

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11-24-2007, 06:49 PM

Hmm... I think theres another thread with the same question... I already commented on this exact site before and it still sucks right now - clearly this guy doesn't give a fuck what anyone thinks because the site is exactly the same 6 hours later.

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11-24-2007, 09:03 PM

Well you say it's fucking awful with no feedback on what you don't like about it. I'm frustrated with it myself.
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11-24-2007, 09:06 PM

What's the background? A cow with herpes?
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11-24-2007, 09:06 PM

saying it's awful though is a bit ridiculous.
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11-24-2007, 09:08 PM

I tried to do a XMas background but it doesn't look right I don't know. I don't know to me it looks good but too much like wrapping paper. lol.
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11-24-2007, 09:11 PM

Originally posted by MCRiv

saying it's awful though is a bit ridiculous.

The background sucks, there are to many styles of type. THAT prevents me from even looking at the girls which prevents me from getting aroused which prevents me from getting out my wallet and giving you money.

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11-24-2007, 09:33 PM

haha.. whats with the hard to read, long paragraph? thats not a tour... its a homework assignment!
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11-24-2007, 09:59 PM

never put that much text as an image.
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11-24-2007, 10:27 PM

I'm starting over. I tried to do something abstract but I'm going back to blues and bevel effects, it converts better.
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11-24-2007, 11:10 PM

Originally posted by MCRiv

I'm starting over. I tried to do something abstract but I'm going back to blues and bevel effects, it converts better.

if you just changed the menu, paragraph and "play trailer"/"join now" links to be text links instead of images it would look alot cleaner and really pretty good. it's not good web design to make any of those images and i think it's what's throwing it off
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11-25-2007, 12:16 AM

If you want me to read that.. HAHA... yeah right!

Bigger text... bolder....
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11-25-2007, 01:11 AM

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loads slowly due to too much image based text so the paragraphs need to be html in a vertical scaling table

id make those cells and use html text in there too for more luring and detailed descriptions for each horizontal segment

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11-25-2007, 01:34 AM

Originally posted by MCRiv

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11-25-2007, 01:54 AM

font too small and hard to read ..
I dont like it

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11-25-2007, 01:57 AM

the background is too distracting
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11-25-2007, 02:38 AM

Originally posted by MCRiv

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11-25-2007, 02:40 AM

Those episode boxes are cold. I'd expect to find that tour at IKEA. It's all style but no real substance.

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11-25-2007, 02:52 AM

I can't focus on the girls if you have that background, change the font (impossible to read that) and maybe use brighter colors

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11-25-2007, 03:31 AM

text is a bit hard to read for me

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11-25-2007, 05:16 AM

bigger thumbs, readable text and remove that shit from background

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11-25-2007, 05:20 AM

What would you think about to never make from text a image, google doesn't read images ;)

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never put that much text as an image.
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11-25-2007, 06:46 AM

try a plainer back, that must help

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11-25-2007, 07:47 AM

if the body copy were text instead of a picture i could atleast copy and paste it into notepad so i could read it..but that might be too much work for a viewer

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11-25-2007, 10:07 AM

It reminds me of a slick magazine ad.

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11-25-2007, 10:18 AM

Originally posted by MCRiv

Well you say it's fucking awful with no feedback on what you don't like about it. I'm frustrated with it myself.

I think this tour will put your surfers to sleep. Its boring and unmemorable.
The girls in the top pic need to be airbrushed. They look chubby and have cellulite in that pic. Unless this is an amateur lesbians tour then keep it.
The rest I dont like. The pics are too small and you have to squint to see the action in them, which isnt that sizzling. The logo is boring and looks likeit was made in MS Word.

I wouldnt call it "high quality lesbian porn". some of the clips the lighting was a little dark. I would go with amateur lesbian porn myself.

And having the same large photo on each page of the tour is lazy and boring.
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11-25-2007, 12:54 PM

I woudnt have it on my sites...

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11-25-2007, 01:14 PM

Originally posted by MCRiv

http://www.lezboland.com/leznewa.html

I personally don't like something about it but I'm not sure what. Any ideas? I'm a designer but for some reasom all my galleries and other sites look better for some reason to me. But this site gets all my traffic. I'm trying to accomplish something but to me something's off. Maybe the background? Look at the join page it actually looks better then the tour. Trying to boost conversion for XMas.

I can see what you're trying to achieve, but as all other people said, there's a lot to change, starting by that almost unreadable img text (that should be "live" text). If you want, drop me a msg and I can't fix it keeping the style for cheaps

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11-25-2007, 03:43 PM

backround doesnt work.

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11-25-2007, 04:17 PM

it sounds crazy but I don't want live text it looks too pixelized.
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11-25-2007, 04:19 PM

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11-25-2007, 04:28 PM

looks ok but the background is kinda depressing, or just not appropriate for an adult paysite
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11-25-2007, 04:28 PM

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Here's something else to laugh at the designer your laughiung at's design got a higher design scores then yours at The Best Porn. Also I'm asking for designers objective opinion to get an outside view the site still converts well but I'm trying to perfect it and open to opinions.
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11-25-2007, 04:30 PM

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looks ok but the background is kinda depressing, or just not appropriate for an adult paysite

I agree to me it looks more like ablum art or something maybe I took it a little too far in that direction don't know. See my broblem isn't whether I think a good amount of people in their 20's will like it but I'm need people of all ages and ethnic groups to like it.
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11-25-2007, 04:38 PM

your background conflicts with the actual content way too much, make a shaded background or something much lighter... dont stretch your pics to fit, take your time to make them the right size... more 'real text' less graphic text...

harvey is a good designer and can hook it up swift like...

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11-25-2007, 05:03 PM

Originally posted by Deej

your background conflicts with the actual content way too much, make a shaded background or something much lighter... dont stretch your pics to fit, take your time to make them the right size... more 'real text' less graphic text...

harvey is a good designer and can hook it up swift like...

I didn't stretch the pics. Unfortuately I can't afford to purchase the photos for all the scenes I own so I kind of had to make do with what I had.
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11-25-2007, 05:20 PM

I hate live text you have a limited choice of fonts
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11-25-2007, 05:24 PM

Originally posted by L-Pink

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The background has to go

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11-25-2007, 06:16 PM

what about this one http://www.lezboland.com/leznewalternate.htm
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11-25-2007, 06:53 PM

Originally posted by MCRiv

what about this one http://www.lezboland.com/leznewalternate.htm

Much improved but still needs work. I know you mentioned you don't like live text but really using CSS it's pretty workable. The copy is still hard to read and honestly you aren't using some exotic or brand font so why bother with a text graphic?
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11-25-2007, 07:01 PM

bad tour for SE optimization if you keep all text as image.
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