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pornJester · 08-05-2002, 04:21 AM

Ok biotchez, this is my first tour design ever, I've done my share of graphic design, but never have I done a tour. How about some input....

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hahmike · 08-05-2002, 04:27 AM

every paysite out there has 150,000 hot teen movies, 200+ live sex shows, 100,000+ erotic stories... not going to join unless you can offer them something good or original. but i have the feeling you already knew that.

maybe some shots of the member area would spice it up a bit, a la hustler.com where they have the shots of their movie players (second page, bottom right)

looks pretty basic, not too impressive... like it was made in macromedia fireworks? hmm, anyway. its not that bad but it needs work, looks a little pale.

on another note... that tour will look tiny on a high resolution. how about expanding the length of it, to make it longer.

Arousal Design · 08-05-2002, 04:35 AM

Not bad if that's your first paysite design =D they'll only get better (or hopefully).

Input: keep trying

hyper · 08-05-2002, 04:50 AM

the images look granular, blurry and washed out
the text doesnt stand out
and doesnt excite me on either pages

and the nipples need to be accented.. because thats the name of the site.. they just blend in with her body.

but i would like it alot if all that was fixed

chodadog · 08-05-2002, 06:10 AM

It seems a bit bland, in terms of colour. Not enough eye candy for my liking. A few dashes of colour could have a pretty large impact on it if in my opinion.

08-05-2002, 04:21 AM	#1
pornJester Confirmed User Join Date: Mar 2001 Location: Florida Posts: 6,138	Rate my tour biotchez! Ok biotchez, this is my first tour design ever, I've done my share of graphic design, but never have I done a tour. How about some input.... http://www.teennips.com __________________ FreshBucks \| Webmaster Vault \| GayAW Trusted Names in Adult. ICQ 9157.3698

08-05-2002, 04:27 AM	#2
hahmike So Fucking Banned Join Date: May 2002 Posts: 2,488	every paysite out there has 150,000 hot teen movies, 200+ live sex shows, 100,000+ erotic stories... not going to join unless you can offer them something good or original. but i have the feeling you already knew that. maybe some shots of the member area would spice it up a bit, a la hustler.com where they have the shots of their movie players (second page, bottom right) looks pretty basic, not too impressive... like it was made in macromedia fireworks? hmm, anyway. its not that bad but it needs work, looks a little pale. on another note... that tour will look tiny on a high resolution. how about expanding the length of it, to make it longer. Last edited by hahmike; 08-05-2002 at 04:29 AM..

08-05-2002, 04:35 AM	#3
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08-05-2002, 04:50 AM	#4
hyper Confirmed User Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: Mass Ass Posts: 5,294	the images look granular, blurry and washed out the text doesnt stand out and doesnt excite me on either pages and the nipples need to be accented.. because thats the name of the site.. they just blend in with her body. but i would like it alot if all that was fixed __________________

08-05-2002, 06:10 AM	#5
chodadog Confirmed User Join Date: Apr 2002 Posts: 9,736	It seems a bit bland, in terms of colour. Not enough eye candy for my liking. A few dashes of colour could have a pretty large impact on it if in my opinion.